valli Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 If you do start a new one, you have at least one reader Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 I loved the chapter More please :9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holden_girl9051 Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 aw loved it the ending was so sweet i'm glad everything turned out well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Chapter 14: Yay Martha survived. The way Jack took care of her was so sweet. They said 'I love you'. Emma is fine too. Chapter 15: There are 4 little Holdens! They are a happy family! So cute! Congratulations to Martha & Jack, Rachel & Kim and Emma & her husband. This is the end but it was a happy end. If you do start a new one, you have at least one reader You'll have at least 2 readers! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 (edited) Yay, a happy ending! And there are four little Holdens Emma's getting married! Hope it's to a nice guy Too bad it's the end, but at least Jack and Martha are together I was about to write "more please", then I realized that it's not much point in that EDIT: And have a great Christmas Mienkie, I hope that you decide to write more Edited December 22, 2007 by valli Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Aww cute ending Enjoy your christmas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Aw, great two chapters And it was the perfect ending I liked how you went too and fro from the past to the present and now to the future, it was a nice touch And now they're a big happy family! YAY! Great writing and a very cute fic. Have a Merry Christmas and happy New Year Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 that was a beautiful ending to a lovely story...you will have me as a reader and if you next story is as good as this one then i will definately be rading it...well done on your fabulous last chapter and im glad that there are 4 holdens now and many more to come lol :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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