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that was fantastic to say the least.

this doesnt change anything martha

dont be silly girl you know jack wont hurt you again....you know

i was the same i went from :lol: to :'( in a matter of seconds as well.

just glad she was ok and it bought jack and martha closer together as well so yeah

update soon

only 4 more chapters ... nooooooooo :(

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You found the time to update! :)

The first chapter was so sweet. They're back together again. :wub:

The second chapter was so sad. :(

Poor Jack, Martha and Emma! :( They were finally happy and together again!

I hope Martha will be okay. She has to get better, Mienkie! :( At least, Emma's fine thanks to her.

More please.

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oh my god no this cant be happening :(

that was so brilliant

chapter 12

they were so happy and they both knew that they could make it work with all there hearts, not just for there daughter but for them :)

chapter 13

Jack's world came crashing down around him.

They were going to be a happy family again but now they might never be :ph34r:

they found Martha clutching onto emma, she may have just sacrificed her life to save her daughter :unsure:

please update soon. martha has to be ok

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