Tasha Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 OMG i absolutely loved that. You wrote with such description of her feelings and whatnot, you made it sound so real. It was beautiful. Beautiful written. Im glad they got back together in the end, i wasnt sure if Martha would give in or not One question though, who was the 'Old Man' that called her??? Was that Jack??? Great writing though Well done! Hope you write more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 Oh my god... *voice trails off* I couldn't believe it...that was...beautiful, sweet, kind, mesmerizing... Ok words could not describe that... Well done...the way you described Martha feelings and the way you...just...everything I am inawe of you right now...well done... That was wonderful and I loved every second of it. It pulls you in like a vortex wanting to be set free and makes you keep reading to find out how it pans out... So beautiful... and thats where I will leave it WOW! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nourtz Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 that was beautiful i loved it!! i wish it would actually happen on the show but its too late now!! please do more i'll read them for sure!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengzilla Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 OMG i absolutely loved that. You wrote with such description of her feelings and whatnot, you made it sound so real. It was beautiful. Beautiful written. Im glad they got back together in the end, i wasnt sure if Martha would give in or not One question though, who was the 'Old Man' that called her??? Was that Jack??? Great writing though Well done! Hope you write more soon Thank you. And that was Alf. I should probably make that more clear. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted February 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 Ah, i had a feeling it was Alf, but then thought otherwise Noticed you changed it too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 I am memerized. You are fantastic at this, please continue with it It was so heartwarming Well Done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I read this yesterday but didnt have time to comment, sorry WOWZA! Talk about detail!! Total awesomeness my friend! And WOOOO to the ending! Screw you Samantha This may sound cruel, but I loved the bit where Martha was crying in agony lol And not because I like to read about Martha being sad, lol. But because you wrote it so well Hmm, and on a more personal note, I luurrrve your username ... only a true genius could come up with a name like that I mean, putting a penguin and godzilla into one ... who'd have thought Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 (edited) That was absolutely beautiful, the description and the way it held my attention from start to finish. Especially loved the parts where you spoke about how much pain she was in and the imaginary puncture in her neck. Superb. My favourite part though had to be the last nice, so incredibly written. But my only fault would be.... I think your name's weird. Edited March 1, 2008 by Jamey-Maria Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengzilla Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 That was absolutely beautiful, the description and the way it held my attention from start to finish. Especially loved the parts where you spoke about how much pain she was in and the imaginary puncture in her neck. Superb. My favourite part though had to be the last nice, so incredibly written. But my only fault would be.... I think you name's weird. :P Heh. You're just jealous. And thank you. Thanks for the comments everyone. They're really nice to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martha-jack Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 wow, that was simply outstanding, the way you described the feelings. amazing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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