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Hahaha!!! Busted big time!!!

Once again an amazingly written chapter :D

"Hi Dad" Now that made me chuckle!!! :lol::lol:

Hmmm I wonder what Mr Mckenzie (Or is it Macklin in this fic... Hmmm I don't know... Oh never mind... basically her Dad) is going to do to Jacky boy? After all he just whitnessed (sp?? Hmmm I can't spell!) him... playing... with his precious little girl!!!... But then again he might not do anything to him... he might patt him on the back :lol: !!!


I love this fic so much!

Haha Well anyways i have to go and stop myself laughing, and it wasnt even that funny, Well it was but... I'm just a random person a times... Oh i think i need to compose myself!

Yeh i'll shut up now!!!!

Update soon please!!!


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Awesome chapter!

Jack and Martha love each other! :wub:

They can't take their hands of each other. :D

They are so busted! :P

“Hi dad”

That made me laugh!

Preview: How will Martha’s parents take to the news of their daughter’s relationship?

Jack and Martha won't be allowed to sleep in the same bed anymore??? But wait... Martha's 19 and Jack's 20, they're old enough. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter!

Please update soon...

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