Tasha Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 So they finally did it Lets hope theres not new mummy and daddy in the Bay More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 Please don't make Martha pregnant Great chapter though, the last bit made me laugh Please update soon, can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 Hehehe Nice dialogue and descriptions, shall we say Emergency pill should work More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 (edited) Finally they gave in! No protection? Shame on you Martha and Jack On the other hand, a baby Holden wouldn't be so bad More please! Edited October 11, 2007 by valli Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aejdude Posted October 12, 2007 Report Share Posted October 12, 2007 I loved that chap! You write Jack and Martha so well. I really liked that it was just the two of them in the chap and i'm glad they had sex but i don't want martha to be pregnant as if the baby comes it'll get all the attention and the focus won't be on martha and jack's relationship. Update soon! Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted October 12, 2007 Report Share Posted October 12, 2007 I disagree wiv that comment i think if they did hav a baby it wud make their relationship alot stronger and bring them closer 2gether they wud be a family as they have wanted to be. Update Soon its grt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Hi dee83 - I've noticed that you're relatively new to the board. Sorry to be a pain but there is a rule about SPAG on this forum and it includes the fact that you're not allowed to write in text speak. If you could just remember to write without using text speak abbrieviations next time you post then that would be great. Sorry to be so annoying it's just part of the rules, so I thought I'd alert you to it! And Rach - brilliant fic as always. Please please update!!! It's been too long... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Aww Jack and Kim's 'talk' Cool Chapter Would comment more but am ill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-x-Siana-x- Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 You made us wait??? For that I think you should update extra soon! Oh and never make us wait again!!! Brill as usual! Bless them they were so worried! Just lets hope that the pill works!!! Jack and Kims talk... Funny! Haha Update soon? Please???... Pretty please with a cherry on the top?... Pleaseeeeee!!!... I'll even smile sweetly... *Smiles sweetly* Siana__x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted October 14, 2007 Report Share Posted October 14, 2007 Tash is so funny Poor Jack Poor Martha Once they get this all sorted out they can live happily ever after that was a great chapter but you made us wait please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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