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Martha” he again called out softly after several quite seconds.

Hmm” she mumbled back against his shirt.

Taking a deep breath he continued to speak. “I miss you”.

Pulling away from his chest she looked into his watery eyes; swallowing down the lump that had now formed in her throat she spoke up. “Please don’t, I’m doing really well … I’m being strong and not needing you, I can’t fall back now” she released a nervous laugh; her face displaying a certain amount of worry and sadness.

Sorry” he lowered his head.

Its ok” she smiled back sadly; hesitating before she continued, “but if it’s any consolation … I miss you too”.

Awww how cute :wub: Bless... They miss each other!

Brilliant as usual!

Update soon please :)


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I know I told you to halve the chapter but did you have to do it at that precise point?! Geeez Rach :P Update soooooon ish :D

So it's your fault then? :P

Aww Martha and Jack finally together, well almost anyway...

Please, please update soon :) Loving this story.

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