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Yay, Martha has body guards. Im happy now, and i loved the way Jack spoke to all the cop people. I dont like the sound of that new constable though, he sounds to hot to be around Martha. He better not do anything <_< But Martha would never do anything like that to Jack so i dont have anything to worry about :D Go Mattie, Belle is such a spoilt brat. Whats Henry up to, he didnt organise for Sarah Lewis to come back did he?????? Great chapter though

Please update soon :D

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That was brilliant I loved it. :D

Glad you liked it.......the next chapter will be up soon! :lol:

Mean while here is a little snippet for you all:D

“Cute sister!” the _____ whispered into _____ ear. “It’d be a shame if anything happened to her. Better watch it, you failed in ________ and Sarah isn't going to be happy about this. I’m only in this stupid job so I can feed her information about what's going on!”

____ looked up at the _____ and gave him a filthy look.

“You stay the hell away from my sister and my family, if anything happens to them I’ll be coming after you or whoever hurt them myself!” _____ whispered back and walked in before _____ or anyone noticed he hadn’t walked in yet.

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Great chapter. I thought this fan fic was meant to be mostly Jack and Martha, but its more other people :P Sorry for being annoying. Ummm...but yeh its good. Oh yeh, im glad Martha has got security around her :D

Please update soon :)

its ok at the start it was just going to martha and jack and there will be more of a mention of them in the next few chapters so hope you like it either way :cool:

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