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I loved it! :D The lyrics suited the text really well and a great ending.

I could almost feel Belle's pain, but first I assumed that it was because of the break-up with Drew, but then it turns out that it was because Drew was dead :o

All emotions were captured really well and great descriptions :D

Great oneshot, really well written :D

Posted

This is the first Belle/Drew fic I've read. :)

Poor Belle! :(

The description you made of Belle's emotions was beautiful. Like HM said, you can almost feel her pain.

The lyrics fit perfectly with the story. Plus, it's a great song. :wub:

And Drew didn't cheat on her. :)

Hope to read another oneshot really soon.

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Hi, could you please add a BTTB rating and warnings to your fic= Just post it or edit in to your form at the beginning of your fic and it will be included in your sub title. BTTB requires everyone to add a rating and warnings (if needed) for fanfics. Thanks in advance :)

Eli, Moderator.

Posted (edited)

OMG! I wasn't expecting that! :o I think it's the first Drelle fic I've read.

I think you're an awesome writer. :D

Edited by carmelle
Posted

I loved reading this fic and i didn't realise that Drew was dead till the end! So unexpected and really well written.

I could really imagine Belle at the beach and the emotion was described so well. The song really complimented the fic.

Well done. :)

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