Keep Bleeding (by matticus01) - comments

[valli]

I loved it! The lyrics suited the text really well and a great ending.

I could almost feel Belle's pain, but first I assumed that it was because of the break-up with Drew, but then it turns out that it was because Drew was dead

All emotions were captured really well and great descriptions

Great oneshot, really well written

[Barbara]

This is the first Belle/Drew fic I've read.

Poor Belle!

The description you made of Belle's emotions was beautiful. Like HM said, you can almost feel her pain.

The lyrics fit perfectly with the story. Plus, it's a great song.

And Drew didn't cheat on her.

Hope to read another oneshot really soon.

[Eli]

Hi, could you please add a BTTB rating and warnings to your fic= Just post it or edit in to your form at the beginning of your fic and it will be included in your sub title. BTTB requires everyone to add a rating and warnings (if needed) for fanfics. Thanks in advance

Eli, Moderator.

[matticus01]

ive done it...sorry I didn't notice i missed it out

[Zetti]

I loved thet.

The song fitted it perfectly

[carmelle]

OMG! I wasn't expecting that! I think it's the first Drelle fic I've read.

I think you're an awesome writer.

Edited March 3, 2008 by carmelle

[Anaya]

I loved reading this fic and i didn't realise that Drew was dead till the end! So unexpected and really well written.

I could really imagine Belle at the beach and the emotion was described so well. The song really complimented the fic.

Well done.