valli Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 I loved it! The lyrics suited the text really well and a great ending. I could almost feel Belle's pain, but first I assumed that it was because of the break-up with Drew, but then it turns out that it was because Drew was dead All emotions were captured really well and great descriptions Great oneshot, really well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 This is the first Belle/Drew fic I've read. Poor Belle! The description you made of Belle's emotions was beautiful. Like HM said, you can almost feel her pain. The lyrics fit perfectly with the story. Plus, it's a great song. And Drew didn't cheat on her. Hope to read another oneshot really soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted February 28, 2008 Report Share Posted February 28, 2008 Hi, could you please add a BTTB rating and warnings to your fic= Just post it or edit in to your form at the beginning of your fic and it will be included in your sub title. BTTB requires everyone to add a rating and warnings (if needed) for fanfics. Thanks in advance Eli, Moderator. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 ive done it...sorry I didn't notice i missed it out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I loved thet. The song fitted it perfectly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carmelle Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 (edited) OMG! I wasn't expecting that! I think it's the first Drelle fic I've read. I think you're an awesome writer. Edited March 3, 2008 by carmelle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 I loved reading this fic and i didn't realise that Drew was dead till the end! So unexpected and really well written. I could really imagine Belle at the beach and the emotion was described so well. The song really complimented the fic. Well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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