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Great start!

I loved the way we sort begin with two unknown persons and we sort of see that something must have happened in the past, and then we go to the past to see what happened. But we still don’t know who pretended to be dead (even though I have a feeling that Jack is the guy :unsure: ) and why. And we also know by now that is has been an accident. Really exciting! I love when everything isn’t given to us straight away and we have to see the "pattern" for ourselves :D

Can’t wait to read more! It’s really exciting!

More please!

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Great start!

I loved the way we sort begin with two unknown persons and we sort of see that something must have happened in the past, and then we go to the past to see what happened. But we still don’t know who pretended to be dead (even though I have a feeling that Jack is the guy :unsure: ) and why. And we also know by now that is has been an accident. Really exciting! I love when everything isn’t given to us straight away and we have to see the "pattern" for ourselves :D

Can’t wait to read more! It’s really exciting!

More please!

I am sooooooo glad you like it HM...I'm still not sure where i will go with this fic or how many chapters it will have or whether or not i will keep you all guessing for jusdt another couple of chapters or through the whole lot right till the end but what i do know is that in each chapter i write there is going to be clue's to who it might be, thats why I'm writing the points of veiws from different people...would love to know what everyone thinks :huh:

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