dee83 Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Great Fan Fic When You Gonna Continue With It Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Sorry I've been caught up in my other fic and I'm doing alot of stuff at the moment, so I don't know when the next update will be, I'll try to do one soon!!! Caitlyn XxXxX :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whats occuring Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 IT SOUNDS INTERSTING GREAT WORK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 yeah Great work i have 2 agree and hope the other fic that your writing has gone and everything else I know stuff can be abit of a nightmare a times. Think Of starting a Fic Myself Any Ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Hope you gonna continue with this Fan Fic cause its fantastic Update Soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Sorry I haven'y updated for a while but I was away on holidays so I didn't really have a chance...but here's the next update!!... Chapter 8-The First Move Orlando's P.O.V It was so dark. Like looking down a well that was never ending. I wanted to get out. But I couldn’t. My efforts to do so were hopeless. It was also cold. So, so, cold. Like being in ice. And yet it was hot. So, so, hot. Like being in a fiery furnace. Everything ached. So much pain. But then I heard a voice. It was a female voice. I recognized it. But couldn’t place it through the pain. ‘Orlando,’ it whispered ‘please wake up, please’ It whispered gently, yet I could pick out the fear in it. ‘Orlando, please, I need you, we all need you’ She then laughed ‘Especially the school soccer team, they lost their game yesterday’ Her voice grew serious again ‘Please, you’ve been unconscious for a week now, wake up’ My then I could feel her touch my arm, and I realized it was Olivia. I felt something warm and wet on my arm and realized it was a tear. I opened my eyes and turned to her, tilting her lowered head up to meet my eyes ‘Don’t cry’ I whispered She slowly grinned and let out a yell that was a mixture of a surprise, happiness and a laugh. Olivias P.O.V I sat on my bed laughing with Ella about something that happened at school. It had been a 2 weeks since Orlando had woken up and 1 week since he’d gotten out of hospital. He and Melissa were still going strong and I could tell when I looked at them that they liked each other very much. ‘So what’s happening with you and Ryan?’ Ella said wriggling her eyebrows up and down then giggling. Olivia’s face turned crimson, and she turned away to hide it. ‘What’re you talking about?’ Olivia said as she pretended to be fiddling with something on her bedside table. ‘Don’t act all innocent with me, I’ve seen the chemistry between you two ever since Orlando’s accident, so spill’ Ella grinned as Olivia looked sheepish ‘Well yeah ever since the accident we have been flirting like crazy, but nothings happened’ Ella smiled ‘Maybe you should make the first move’ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Great so far but I think what Ellas said was right I think she needs to make the first move or she`ll never get the guy she wants update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Awww glad you updated The bit where Orlando was in his coma was wonderful, so descriptive and powerful. Update soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Hope your gonna keep updating cause can`t wait to find what happens next plus when do we find out about the twins changed reactions to Marthas pregnancy update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Hope your gonna continue with this Fic cause its great I`m really loving it and can`t wait for an update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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