matticus01 Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Ok...Martha hunni...your not blood related First you watch him getting dressed, then you have a 'tender' moment with him and finally you two are on the same page and then you put your wall back up...what to do...what to do! You know that Jack isn't going to hurt you, and he certainly wouldn't run back to his mates and tell them that 'he screwed his sister' Good luck with Uni Rach and cant wait for the next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 fantastic story so far hope yr going 2 update soon cause its grt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Thanks for the comments; they really are appreciated Warning: content maybe unsuitable for younger readers Sorry for the extreme shortness in this chapter, the next one will be longer Chapter 5: For the rest of the evening everything remained awkward. Martha and Jack of course kept up with the pleasantries, but when their parents backs were turned, the daggers came out. Mostly from Martha’s side; as every time Jack glanced over towards her, she would flash him an unimpressed glare. Silently warning him with her eyes, to know his place. As they sat at dinner, Martha kept her head focused down onto her plate. She didn’t even want to look at Jack at a time like this. Not only was she still furious with him for trying it on with her, but she’d hate to give him the satisfaction of knowing that she was genuinely upset over it. The truth was, she hated fighting with him, and it couldn’t have happened at a worse time; just as they were beginning to make progress. “Is everything alright between you two?” Tony inquisitively darted his vision too and fro from Jack to Martha, sensing something was wrong, “you seem awfully quiet tonight”. “Yep, everything’s fine” she grinned, “isn’t it big brother” she glared at Jack before smiling. “It sure is little sis” he forced a smile; inside he was cringing. Turning back to their meals they left Tony to make sense of their rather bizarre behaviour, before he too turned back to his food… ……………………… “Are you going to keep ignoring me all evening?” he hissed into her ear as they stood side by side at the dessert counter. She frowned, tilting her head to the side and acting as if she may have heard something, before she ignorantly turned back to look at the puddings. “Oh, very mature Martha” he rolled his eyes before leaving her to it. Why should he even bother if all she was going to do was act like a spoilt brat. Walking back towards the table he took a seat beside Elli. Placing his arm around her shoulders he pulled her in close, “how’s it going cutie” he grinned down at her as her little face looked up at him smiling. “Good!” she beamed, “except Martha took the last of the chocolate cake. She’s so annoying sometimes” she moaned as she glared into the distance at her sister. “Yeah, you’re right. She is annoying” he grumbled. His eyes also fixed on Martha’s smooth and slim form; but unlike Elli, his stare was masked with annoyance, lust and a burning ache and desire. ……………………… No words were spoken; from the second they entered their hotel room, to the second they went to bed, complete silence filled the air. Both dared-not to say any words, as no doubt about it, what would start out small, would yet again erupt and blow up into world war 3. Lying on her back with her eyes closed shut, she tried to push aside her constant thoughts … but it was no use, all that her mind remained focussed on, was her exam results, family life, and most recently, her fight with Jack! She only wondered if Jack was thinking it to. That deep down he just wished they could take it back. After all, arguing and ignoring each other, certainly wasn’t how they had wanted to spend their family holiday together … ……………………… (1.30am) Jack lay on his side, his eyes opened wide as he watched Martha intently. Taking in every movement she made, her chest slowly rising and falling with every breath she took. She looked so peaceful … so beautiful … He frowned, rolling onto his back and releasing a heavy breath. He couldn’t seem to settle, his head was banging from his constant thoughts about Martha. This urge he had to touch her, caress her and kiss her all over. He could just picture their bodies moulding together like a jig saw puzzle, with everything tiny inch of their skins perfectly bound together in harmony. Why couldn’t he just get her out of his head!? ………………………… (1.45am) A chill was in the air, and Martha shivered in her sleep at the lack of warmth she was feeling. . A rustling and a gentle tugging on her quilt unsettled her slumber; causing her to stir. Opening her tired eyes she came face to face with Jack. “WHA!” she sprung rigid through shock. “About blumin time” he spoke down to her from where he was standing, “do you know how long I’ve been standing here!” Her eyes remained opened wide, a frown slowly forming on her face, “Jack what are you doing!?” she asked; trying to remain calm and settle her slightly erratic breathing. He smiled, flicking the covers away from her body and holding out his hand, “Come on” he gently urged her. She continued to frown, oblivious and slightly concerned about his intentions. “What? ... Why?” “I want to take you somewhere”. She huffed in annoyance, “Didn’t you listen to a single word that I told you today!” she argued with him in a low but deadly voice. He rolled his eyes before leaning further towards her, “Will you just shut up for like 2 seconds and do as you’re told!” he looked into her eyes, before grabbing her hand and pulling her upwards. “Wait! Jack! Just tell me what’s going on” she tugged at his hand, pulling him back to face her. “You’ll find out, when we get there”… Preview: Will Jack ever make progress with Martha ... and sexual tension's are running high Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Tensions! Please make them erupt Cool chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 awwww...i have been reading I love it. Great 3 chapters. Martha cant deny her love for Jacky forever, no-one can More please and good luck with uni Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 sexual tentions hey? this sounds interesting . Can't wait to read what happens next. Awsome job. Hope Uni's going well for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Great update You can cut the Sexual Tension with a knife Update soon Rachieee xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 oh u can cut the sexual tension wiv a knife cant wait 2 find out wot happens nxt update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Sexual tension!!!!! Goody. My favourite. Martha's nuts. End of. Take him. I definitely would. lol. Great update Rach. More please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Sexual tension sounds interesting... Can't the two of them just give in? We all know they both want to Wonder what Jack's up to now... Hopefully Martha'll enjoy it More please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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