nanook Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 loving the fiction please continue... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 Okay, after recommendation, I'm reading your fic. I was gonna wait after I read the second chapter to comment.. but I just had the most sickening thought I had to share... "Well, if he was my older brother I'd fancy the pants off him, if I was adopted or not!" :| Oh dear.... EDIT: Chapter 2: Very good! Holiday... oh I wonder what they're going to get up to. Maybe you should just move this fic into the Adult section now... I've heard tales about your writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 Jack and Martha Even though I must agree with Martha. Having your half-brother flirting with you must be gross, but secretly wanting it... I have a feeling that Martha enjoys it more than she's willing to admit If only Jack and Martha weren't related... But then this would probably be much dirtier and in the Adult Section More please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 I don't think they're related, valli. They're not half-brother/sister... She's adopted. It's Jack's adopted sister. So it's perfectly legal. And it's totally gonna happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 I don't think they're related, valli. They're not half-brother/sister... She's adopted. It's Jack's adopted sister. So it's perfectly legal. No, I checked now. They're not. Now I'm showing just how many details I remember And it's totally gonna happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 I wondered why people were so freaked out about it! Now I realise Yes, just to be clear, they are NOT blood related. Jack is the son of Tony Holden, and Martha is Tonys adopted child If they were related, then I would just be the sickest person ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 lol Jack, he cracks me up. I kinda feel sorry for Martha, it would be extreemely creepy having your brother constantly hitting on you, regardless of if he was blood related or not. But I can't wait to see how this holiday goes, Jack and Martha sharing a room, well this should be interesting. Awsome Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 Well iv got nothing to ammuse you with tonight lol!! This is great im loving it!! Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Sorry Tash So much for your promised update Ive been really busy, but I'll update asap. (you probably wont get to read it in time though My bad ) Heres a little preview for the next chapter ---- The Holden clan arrive at their holiday destination. How will Martha and Jack take to sharing a room? And with Jacks remarkably persistant flirting, will he win Martha over with a kiss? More importantly, what will it mean for their relationship if he does? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 hey im still on till tonight my time So you have till then *angelic look* Im going to assume there is a kiss, so this will be interesting. Incestuous butt heads Even thought their not blood related Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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