bijou Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 STORY TITLE: Reality Check TYPE OF STORY: long fic STARING: Jack, Sam, Chelsea, Libby + more RATING: A GENRE: drama SPOILERS: no PLOT: Jack is 30 in this story (i'm not sure how old he really is) and a 15 year old girl shows up on Jacks doorstep claiming to be his daughter. (Other things happen though) CHAPTER ONE A young girl around 15 was looking around Jack and Sam's house. "What are you doing?" a voice called out, it was Rachel. "Do you live here?" the girl asked "I'm moving out but two other people do" "Is one of them Jack Holden" "What's that got to do wih you?" "Everything" the girl said as she wraped her long blonde hair around her finger. "Well?" she asked Rachel Rachel stood there silent for a couple of minutes not knowing wheather to tell the girl or not. "Yes" she finally said "Do you know where he is?" Jack pulled in the driveway with Lucas. "That him?" the girl asked raising her eyebrows. Rachel sttod there thinking of something to say "HEY" the girl called called out to Jack and Lucas "Are one of you Jack Holden?" she asked them "Yeah me, why?" Jack asked "Do you remember some by the name of Libby Teague who you used to be married to?" "Yeah" "And you two had a child together, ringing any bells?" Jack frowned and the girl sighed. "My name's Chelsea Teague, your daughter. END OF CHAPTER ONE CHAPTER TWO UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Great!! :cool: keep going !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 let me guess Chelsea will be really bitchy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 CHAPTER TWO Chelsea was helping Sam clean up before Jack got home from work. "So how long have you and my dad been married?" Chelsea asked Sam "A couple of weeks" Sam replied. "You don't seem like the type he'd marry" "Why?" Sam asked "Because you seem like dads type, i mean mum and that Martha chick are like supermodels and well maybe if McDonalds was desperate". "Excuse me" Sam stood up from neeling position "Well it's true" "Am i interupting something?" Jack said as he walked in. "Your daughter called me ugly" Sam told him "Did you?" Jack asked "Well i didn't actually use the word ugly" she told her father. Jack sighed "I thought Libby would have taught you better than that" "Oh i'm going" Chelsea said as she stormed off out the door. END OF CHAPTER TWO CHAPTER 3 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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