*caitie* Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 crap Ringo better not hurt him, hope he goes to jail, update soon, dying 2 know what happens!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 CHAPTER 9 "Hey" Jack said walking into Luc's hospital room. "Bored?" he asked while watching Lucas flick through channells on the tv Lucas made a slight grunting noise. "We arrested Ringo" Jack told him "Why?" Luc asked "Well isnt that what you wanted" "I didn't say that" "Well why did you say who did it?" Jackasked as he frowned. "Because you were all arguing" "Bub, can i come" a voice interupted, it was Ringo. "What are doing here?", get out" Jack said cutting Lucas off "Jack it's ok" Luc said as he turned and looked at Ringo making sure he could the the parts of his face that were half gone. "I just wanted to say i'm sorry, i lost my temper, can you forgive me?" Ringo asked. Lucas took a deep breath and closed his eyes. "Look at that face, do think he'd be willing to forgive?" Jack interupted Lucas tried to say something but word couldn't come to his mouth so he hoped a violent stare would do the trick. "Ok i'll go" Ringo said putting his head down. Jack grabbed Luc's hand "Don't worry i'll make he wont come back" Jack noticed Lucas' eyes were wide open and then he started hold on to the blankets tightly. "Luc, Luc, LUCAS LOOK AT ME" Jack screamed as he slapped Lucas accross the face Lucas started to flatline. "Jack you need to leave" Sam told him as she and a few other doctors came racing in. "Jack c'mon" Sam said "Just go" "Is he gonna be ok?" Jack asked "TELL ME HE'S GONNA BE OK?" Jack said with tears running down his face. Sam pushed Jack out of the romm and shut the door in his face. CHAPTER 10 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 CRAP LUCAS CAN'T DIE!!!!!!!!!!please tell me he doesn't die!!!!please update soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 CHAPTER 10 Sam came walking out of the hospital room. "How is he?, please tell me he's ok" Sam remained silent "Oh no" Jack cried "I'm sorry Jack, we did everything we could but..." "Well do more" he told her "Jack..." Jack started to cry and Sam hugged him. "You can see him if you want" "I gotta call dad" "I can do that" she offered He walked in ther rooom to see Luc's stiff body "Sorry mate, should protected you" he said as he ran his fingers through he's hair He wiped his tears away and stormed violently out of the room. "Jack where are you going" Sam called as he walked off in the distance CHAPTER 11 UP SOON I may not be able to update for about a week so bare with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 LUCAS!!!!!NOOO!!!please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 sorry i haven't updated in a while CHAPTER 11 Everyone was sitting in the church at Luc's funeral crying. "Lucas was always a go getter, if he saw something he wanted he went for it". Tony said in his speech while looking up and seeing Ringo standing at the door. "And then you came along" he shouted across the church and everyone turned around "You killed him" "I'm sorry, i never meant for it to happen" Ringo cried "He trusted you, he was willing to give you the benefit of the doubt" Ringo wiped his eyes "BBlaming me will not bring him back" Ringo yelled out Jack got out of his seat and walked up to Ringo and punched him END OF CHAPTER 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 lucas poor Tony And i also feel a bit sorry for Ringo, but not that much!! Plaese update soon!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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