*caitie* Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 haha "boo, or bub or bubba" lol!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 CHAPTER 5 "Hey, get now" Jacck said as he woke Lucas up. "What are you doing" Ringo got out of the front of the ute whare he'd slept. "Stay out of this" "Jack go away, i'll do what i want, he's my dad" "No Tony's your dad" "Ah right" "Luc c'mon" Jack said he grabbed Lucas' ams and pulled him away from Ringo. "Jack let go of me" Ringo walked up and pushed Jack away from Lucas. "Get away from my son" he told Jack Lucas looked at Jack "Just go" Lucas said to Jack "Why are you hanging around him?, he's a murderer" "Because i need time to get my head around this, plus his actually a really nice guy" "Bubba doesn't want you here, so go" "What was that about, pushing Jack?". "I was looking out for you" Ringo told his son "That's sweet, i gotta go to school, so i'll just get changed". "Do you want a ride?" "Sure" "HEY BOO" Ringo called out "Did you mean that?, when you said i was a nice guy" Lucas smiled "Yeah" CHAPTER 6 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 hmm, I don't like Ringo, don't know why lol!!He's up 2 something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Please update soon! Like it alot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 CHAPTER 6 "Hey" Lucas said walking up to the truck in the dark "Where've you been?" Ringo growled "With Belle Drew and Cassie studying we have an exam tomorrow" Luc replied. "Nice of you to ask or let me know" "I'm sorry?" Lucas said frowning "Hey you don't get to tell me what to do just yet". "You will live by my rules seeing i'm looking after you" Ringo said as he walked towards Lucas while Lucas back away "Sorry i didn't think you would mind" Lucas said "YOU DIDN'T THINK I WOULD MIND" Ringo shouted as he smashed Luc's face on the passenger side window "YOU DIDN'T THINK I WOULD MIND" he shouted again as he picked Lucas and thew him on the ground and then stood on his head making it impossible for him to get up. Lucas cried while Ringo stopped shocked by what he'd just done. "I'm so sorry" Ringo told Lucas and picked him up "You know i'd never do that deliberetly don't you, i guess i just lost my temper you understand don't you" Ringo said then Lucas nodded afraid of what he would do next if he said no "Good boy" Ring saidas he wiped blood out of Luc's eye and kissed his hair "We have to stick together, look out for each other ok" CHAPTER 7 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 omg crap Lucas RUN!!!!!!!!!!!You have to update soon!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 CHAPTER 7 Ringo had fell asleep while Lucas was still wide awake think of the events that had happened earlier. He got up trying not to make a sound and walked over to the hospital, his eyes had been stinging with blood all night and his arm was killing him. "He..." Lucas only got out half of what he was about to say before collapsing and fitting on the floor "LUCAS DAMN IT SOMEBODY HELP" Sam called out "He's been belted" Rachel said as they put him on a bed "I'll call Jack" Sam said. "Are you sure that's a good idea?" Rachel replied. "He is a cop" "Right" "Can you tell me who did this to you" Rachel asked Luc trying to get him to stay awake. "It happened while i was surfing" Lucas told her while still groggy "This late" Sam said as she came back in "Yeah i was bored" Sam and Rachel walked out once he was stabilized. "He didn't get that while surfing" Rachel told Sam "And he's not gonna say who did it" "What's going on?" Jack interupted "Luc's been belted but he wont say who did it" Sam filled him in. "One guess who?" Jack told them both. "Jack, we don't know that" CHAPTER 8 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 what an A**HOLE for hurting Lucas. but i do like your story it's intense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 poor Lucas, he should tell them who did it!!!hope Jack catches Ringo!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 CHAPTER 8 "Bub" Ringo called as he ran into the hospital "Ringo it's ok he's fine we're her to keep him company and look after him" Tony told him "Something doctors and relatives should be doing and seeing you neither of them you don't need to be here" Ringo told Tony giving him a hint to go. "You ok, what happened?" Ringo asked Lucas knowing very well what had actually happened. "He was belted, but he wont say who did it, he just said he fell off his surfboard" Rachel butted in "Ringo you really should go and let Lucas get a goodnight sleep" Sam said. "I'm not gong anywhere, Boo's my son if anyone's going it should be Tony and Jack the don't need to be here the're no relation or anything" Ringo started to raise his voice. Lucas sighed "Where have you been for the past 18 years of Luc's life?, oh that's right in prison for murder" Tony snapped walking towards Ringo. "Hey you weren't even gonna tell him about me" Ringo snapped back "Ringo did it" Lucas said but no one heard him over the noise Tony and Ringo were making. "Hey, kiss my ass" Ringo shouted "Well it wouldn't surprise me if you came back to kill Lucas" Tony was allso shouting. "RINGO HIT ME" Lucas screamed and butted in. They all stared at Lucas "Now can you all just go" Lucas told them all angrily CHAPTER 9 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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