At Last, It's Over (by valli) - comments

[Eli]

Now this would be a JM storyline I could enjoy! I usually don't read JM fics, but I like this one! Mwahahaha! *evil laughter*

No, seriously, it's really well written, I can picture it actually happening on H&A. Most fics I don't do that (they're well written, it's not that!) and I found the conversations very believeable.

Also the lyrics (even though I have never heard the song) was perfect for the fic! I love it when I find lyrics that just fit perfectly into a fic I'm writing

[Tasha]

she tore her wedding pictures up?? Thats a bit harsh

That was sad Poor Jacky

Glad Martha stood up for herself though, and did what she felt was right

great one shot

Edited October 21, 2007 by Tasha