Cal Posted October 19, 2007 Report Posted October 19, 2007 ... That was great! But it was sad... Eli, you made me sad on a Friday night! Oh well, I guess I can forgive you because the writing was excellent and the format was really interesting. It kept you reading, and that's really really important. Oh, and the Mug! Shattered! Just like all hope! Quote
aejdude Posted October 19, 2007 Report Posted October 19, 2007 (edited) It was good. But sad. I think Geoff should have kept the mug but i can see why he did what he did. Edited October 19, 2007 by aejdude Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted October 19, 2007 Report Posted October 19, 2007 awww that was so sad and beautiful Eli. And it's such a shame, because you just know he'll regret throwing that mug.... Quote
Eli Posted October 19, 2007 Report Posted October 19, 2007 Thanks guys, I really appreciate the comments, they mean a lot! Quote
Marieh Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 That was so sad Eli, in the most beautiful way. It actually made me sad. Downloading the song right now I've forgotten how good the song really is (I love the lyrics in it) Quote
emmasi Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 (edited) *sniff*... mug... Everyone's already said it, but yeah, great writing, very sad... shattered mug... The sound of the mug breaking into a hundred pieces was almost like a relief, like it at least made up for the silence Lucas had left him. Loved that line. So true, that you just want to hear *anything* in a silence like that... Still crying silently Geoff bent down and picked up two of the largest pieces. He cut his hand on one of them, but he didn't really feel the pain. I could see that part really vividly (maybe cause of the crying I've seen Geoff do recently ...). So very very sad, and so very like Lucas, doing the best thing for everyone... sigh. Edited October 20, 2007 by emmasi Quote
valli Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 That was so sad! A great oneshot, I almost felt sad because it was over... Poor Geoff, left behind by the person he loves so much I think he’s going to regret throwing the mug. Quote
Eli Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 Thanks you guys! Marieh - Yeah, I really love that song! It's his best song in my opinion. emmasi - Lincoln Lewis does cry in a very convincing way valli - Hey, another Norwegian I didn't know about! Yay! Quote
Zetti Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 Aww that was heartbreaking and overwhelming. So overwhelming that it is beautiful Quote
Jen Posted October 21, 2007 Report Posted October 21, 2007 Amazingly written, Eli. Poor Geoffy! I could definitely see him shattering the mug and then regretting it the moment it hits the ground. But I can't help but feel excited at the prospect of Lucas coming to my uni! (Although I know that wasn't the point of the story). But again, you write this relationship so well. Quote
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