kaciexox Posted July 17, 2007 Report Share Posted July 17, 2007 yay its Here and its awsome! i love it, poor MArtha update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 18, 2007 Report Share Posted July 18, 2007 awww...my poor Martha. If Sam is in this fic, i will cry Jacky better not be having an affair, otherwise i'll hurt him A baby girl, how cute. Baby Kaitlin Holden More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted July 18, 2007 Report Share Posted July 18, 2007 Great start! Poor Martha, all she wants is for Jack to show some interest but no, he's too busy playing cop Hope he starts putting her first before its too late... Aww, baby girl Holden How adorable. More soon please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted July 18, 2007 Report Share Posted July 18, 2007 It keeps posting wierd. Does anyone know how i can sort it out? ( Am hoping this time it posts with speech marks!! If your refering to small boxes coming up when you edit it. They dont apear as long as you click on the full edit button. If you press quick edit (or whatever its called) it comes up with the boxes. So just make sure you press full edit Great second chapter, looking forward to more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alicia-jade Posted July 19, 2007 Report Share Posted July 19, 2007 Part 3 Martha sat at home for hours waiting for Jack to come back. His shift was due to finish at 11 but it was long after this that he finally arrived home. He crept in the front door as quietly as he could, assuming Martha would be in bed asleep. “You're back then” she said coldly, not moving from her well-used seat on the couch. “Martha” Jack said, surprise evident in his whisper. “I thought you’d be on bed” “I wanted to make sure you got home okay. Thought your shift finished at 11?” “I stayed on, sorry”. He sat down next to her. “I’m really sorry about earlier too. What happened at Dad and Beth’s”. He grasped her hand in his. “You left these. I’ve been looking at them all evening” he said pulling them out of his pocket. “Our baby” he breathed, finally feeling the joy Martha had when she first found out they were having a girl. “Our little girl” he said moving in to kiss Martha. “Jack, please. It’s really late” she said pulling her head away before he could kiss her. “I’m going to bed” she said grabbing her class of water off the coffee table and leaving the room. “Don’t you want to tal..” he began but stopped, feeling crestfallen as he heard the bedroom slam shut. “looks like we’re on the couch tonight” he said holding up the scan pictures of his unborn daughter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted July 19, 2007 Report Share Posted July 19, 2007 Aww You should have hurried back Jack! More soon please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 20, 2007 Report Share Posted July 20, 2007 Poor Jacky Poor Martha Great chapter More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 grt story so far hope u update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 hope you update soon its great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmo_loves_you Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 update sooon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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