Roccoluver Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 Title: Away and Home Author: Me Category: long fic if I have readers Genre: everything Main Characters: everyone Rating: T-A Summary: Sort of a spoof of HAA, if you thought things happened far to often in HAA then you will be really shocked with this story. I promise each update will have at least one character on the edge on death NOTE- This is my first script fic, any problems please tell me INT. SCENE. Summer Bay House Sally walks into the lounge. Brad is sitting on the couch looking at a piece of paper. Sally- Hey, your up late Brad- Mmm, yeah Sally frowns and walks over to Brad Sally- Is everything okay? Brad looks up from the piece of paper Brad- No, it isn’t. EXT. SCENE Beach. Jack and Martha are running along the beach, laughing like little children. Martha- Give it back Jack smirks at her but keeps running Jack- If you want it come get it Martha- Don’t make me hurt you Jack and Martha laugh, suddenly Jack falls over. Martha- Jack, Jack Martha kneels down next to Jack’s body. Marta- Are you okay Martha looks around, then pulls her cellphone out and dials 000. EXT. SCENE Surf Club Belle is walking along, Ric and Matilda are sitting at a table. Belle- Hi guys Ric- Hey Belle Matilda- Hi Belle continues walking along the path and turns to head down to the beach. She stops with a shock look on her face. Drew is hugging a blonde girl. She lets go of him and wanders down the beach. Belle puts on a fake happy face and storms down to Drew Belle- Hey Drew Drew smiles at Belle and wraps his arms around her. Drew- Hey Taylor, I’ve missed you so much. Belle- I bet you have. Drew looks confused. Drew- What are you on about Belle?. Belle- I saw you with that blonde bimbo, we’re over Drew. Belle slaps Drew and races up to the Surf Club. INT. SCENE Surf Club. Alf is stacking things away in the storeroom. Alisa is standing behind him. Alisa- Alf? Alf turns around and looks shocked Alf- Hogan’s ghost, do I have a brain tumor again? Alisa- No Alf, I’m here to deliver a warning Alf- Well strike me handsome, what is it? There’s a loud slam as Belle enters the room. Alisa disappears. Belle- Have you seen Irene Alf? EXT. SCENE Some rural dirt road. Kim is driving and Rachel is in the passenger seat. Rachel doesn’t look to happy to be there. Rachel- Are you sure you know where you’re going? Kim- Of course I’m sure, right over this hill is the nice spot I told you about. Rachel- Well if you say so. The car drives over the hill, all there is dirt and a few scattered trees. Kim- Who moved the picnic area? Who is Brad's child Will Jack survive his terrible fall Who does Drew love What is Alisa's warning Why does anyone trust Kim driving? These questions may or may not be answered next time (or ever) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 lol Great title and fic Hope Kim is one that is on the edge of death and then falls over.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 lol Great title and fic Hope Kim is one that is on the edge of death and then falls over.. Lol! thanks for you comment. As for Kim, well I don't like him.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lynd~ Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 Kim- Who moved the picnic area? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 Great start! Update really soon As for the title. . It made my laugh because my business teacher is always like "Learn this instead if watching Away and Home" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest [x]whacko[x]jen[x] Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 That is funny! Love the whole 'Who moved the picnic spot' More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 12, 2007 Report Share Posted June 12, 2007 Umm, I am trying to write an update for this, I have this sort of one off add on EXT. SCENE Ex- Holden house. The old Holden house is being sold, two real estate agents and there and a new family thinking of moving to the bay. There is Mack- father, Jemma- Mother, Tina- Daughter and Arnie- Son. Mack- It’s a very nice house, but why is it so cheap. Jemma is clearly annoyed by Mack question. Jemma- Mack! Mack- I’m just saying… Real Estate Agent 1- Oh it nothing really, just there’s a slightly higher than normal car, plane and boat crashes in this town. Real Estate Agent 2- And a couple of odd stalkers, there only been 3 Real Estate Agent 1- Only 2 remember, that Zoe girl came back from the dead. Real Estate Agent2- Oh yeah, like Peter Real Estate Agent 1- Oh my god, super hunky cop Mack looks at Jemma clearly unpleased at the information. Jemma frowns. Mack- You know I don’t think Summer Bay is the place for us… Real estate agent 1- Oh don’t let the little things like kidnappings stop you... Real Estate Agent 2- Kidnappings are perfectly normal Real Estate Agent1- And there aren’t that many natural disasters Mack and his family are all making their way to their car. They get in and drive off down the street before spinning out of control and crashing into a pole. Real Estate Agent2- Why do we never manage to sell a house?. Someone makes another return and there will be more on Jack,Brad, Kim and Rachel and Alf soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted June 12, 2007 Report Share Posted June 12, 2007 *reads it again* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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