Liska Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 It was Che!! I hope Ric does something to him!! Great chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 Evil Che, He better get what he deserves, Belle should run away as far as possible from him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aejdude Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 Can't say im surprised Ric Mattie or Lucas wouldn't kill off one of their own family. Hope he gets locked up for a long time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 Glad y'all like it. I have a dilemma with the ending. I'm stuck between two of them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 Glad y'all like it. I have a dilemma with the ending. I'm stuck between two of them. choose the good one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 But they are both good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 I got that same problem with an original story I'm writing, do what I decided to; use whichever ending you prefer/thinks works better as the end and post the other as a kind of 'deleted scene' afterwards, y'know, like a bonus/extra or something. ...And I think I just confuzzled myself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazcaz89 Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 Love the update. I am not liking this Che character. He is hiting belle and killing people. That lad needs to get sent down for life!!! update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted May 14, 2007 Report Share Posted May 14, 2007 Great update, I hope Belle doesnt go back to che after what he has done to her friends. I cant wait to read more its fabtastic Cal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted May 19, 2007 Report Share Posted May 19, 2007 Oh no, Poor Belle. That was a great update more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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