Roccoluver Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 Loved the update, yay for Martha moving in with Jack Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 I also forgot to state at the begining of the fic that Kim and Rachel are living together in a house near the beach NOT with Jack. he is all on his lonesome Also, just to clear this up, the number oin the flyer was Jack's mobile number and also Martha and Mali were parked realatively close to the beach, close enough to recognise someone's face if that should come up in the next chapter *hint hint* Next chapter will be up in a couple of hours.....am working on it now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 also forgot to state at the begining of the fic that Kim and Rachel are living together in a house near the beach NOT with Jack. he is all on his lonesome ooohh reaally? So my poor little Jacky Boy is all alone? well i think a certain brown haired girl and her cute as littl daughter could fix that then couldn't they?? Also, just to clear this up, the number oin the flyer was Jack's mobile number and also Martha and Mali were parked realatively close to the beach, close enough to recognise someone's face if that should come up in the next chapter *hint hint* Ahhh Lily likes that bit.... ^^^^ Ahh i see now about the phone. I wish i had Jacky's Mobile number..... awesome! i can't wait for the update! im all exited! yay keep up the absolutly awesome work and make sure my Jacky Boy isn't lonely for too long...if ya know what i mean... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 (edited) ok just a few spoliers: -Martha gets a phone call from an unexpected person -Jack finds himself risking his own life for Martha -Mali and Martha find themselves in extreme danger -Jack and Martha find themselves doing what they never thought they would ...... don't immediately think the obvious on this one... but maybe who knows? i do enjoy Edited April 2, 2007 by kaciexox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 Aww loved it. Jacky likes Macky I love it! Shame there won't be any new updates for a while. I think for that we should have whole update of fluff and maybe a date if you are feeling generous? Fab post. Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 ^^^ there is some hardcore stuff coming Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 Looking forward to it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 YAY! an update! and an awesome one at that! they will move in won't they!?! i hope so. Martha smiled and said hello before the two men pushed their way past Martha and left. was that supposed to be rudly or just leaving them alone? ok just a few spoliers: -Martha gets a phone call from an unexpected person -Jack finds himself risking his own life for Martha -Mali and Martha find themselves in extreme danger -Jack and Martha find themselves doing what they never thought they would ...... don't immediately think the obvious on this one... but maybe who knows? i do well i'm not sure about no. 1 because the evil mr. man would kinda be expected but maybe not so hmmmm. no. 2 YAY means he likes her no.3 *GASP* my Jacky Boy will save them! (i knew he was a superhero) no. 4 hmmm i will think the obvious on this one untill another update of course! but only when you have time! but it sounds like an interesting chappy! cant wait to read it. thanx for the quickness of the updates! keep it up...xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 Oh noz, Gregg (is that his name) is back Poor Martha. Great chapter though. More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 Fab update Update soon xxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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