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Wow, emmasi, that was awesome!

My favourite stanza was definately the last one with the wind trading sea salt for crying/The sand keeping footprints in grain because it was so descriptive, but also I loved the idea of Summer Bay being a town full of memories and dust and the description of his heart's bitter crust.

I could be here all night quoting my favourite bits, but I just wanna make it perfectly clear that I loved this poem and I seriously think you should write more, emmasi. :)

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That was such a great poem! :)

Yeah, i agree with Jess it was awesome and you should write more. :)

My favourite stanza was the fourth as it really describes Lucas's feelings really well. :D

Hope to see more poems from you. :)

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