Elegy (by emmasi) - comments

[Cerise]

That was brilliant, really well written. The last verse was my favorite

[emmasi]

Thanks! Poetry makes me nervous

[Cal]

I loved that

Normally I hate poetry, but this was excellent! My favourite verse/stanza was the first one.

Edited May 12, 2007 by -Cal-

[Liska]

Very nice!

My favorite verse was the last one!

[~Rosey~]

Wow. Thats was awesome. Its not an everyday thing that we see poems posted on bttb.

Loved the last stanza

[Jess]

Wow, emmasi, that was awesome!

My favourite stanza was definately the last one with the wind trading sea salt for crying/The sand keeping footprints in grain because it was so descriptive, but also I loved the idea of Summer Bay being a town full of memories and dust and the description of his heart's bitter crust.

I could be here all night quoting my favourite bits, but I just wanna make it perfectly clear that I loved this poem and I seriously think you should write more, emmasi.

[aejdude]

That was such a great poem!

Yeah, i agree with Jess it was awesome and you should write more.

My favourite stanza was the fourth as it really describes Lucas's feelings really well.

Hope to see more poems from you.

Edited May 12, 2007 by aejdude

[kaciexox]

that poem was brilliantly written and so desciptive

[tasha7905]

Loved the poem Emmasi, the descriptions were perfect, it seemed so suited to Lucas and I can imagine him writing something like that.

[kennisld]

The bastard son of a ghost

not gonna lie.

that gave me shivers.

wonderfully done.

I'm impressed by your writing and poetry abilities.

keep up the good work!