Cerise Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 That was funny. I love FD so great, unique Idea. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 Thanks I actually have 9 pages written and I think I posted just over 2 here or around that. But i dont want to slack on my other story,By posting all of what i have on this one at once and then write more and not able to stick with the other. So I will post them slowly along on here,Until I have written enough chapters on my other. But I have to say,Its funny lol It's making me laugh as I write it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 This is an excellent start, Reo! I love it Final Destination is a brill movie so I really like this idea. Ric was leaning against Matilda slowly closing his eyes..His hand moved down his waist. Sally: Ric! Take your hand out of your pants! Ric: Wah?! Ric awoke and sat up straight and quickly pulled his hand out and looked away from everyone, But it wasn't too long before he started to fall asleep again. Lucas: I think I have cake in my shorts. Everyone moved away from Lucas. ----- I couldnt stop laughging at them bits! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 lol I thought I may have gone abit too far with Ric and his hand. Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 Reo! Best story ever! I actually laughed at the Lucas-Cake part. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 Thanks Cal. I cant believe that im getting all these good comments. The other chapters are actually far funnier,Too me anyway..So if you like this you will love the rest. But i need to catch up with my other story first,Just a few chapters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 That was great! OMG Colleen died Aww... Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 Yeah,Sad that she went first..But I had no idea's in my head at the start apart from her death and another..I felt it best she have the first death. But its just a story,No-one or thing can get rid of Colleen in real life Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted April 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 LMAO! Colleen 'attacted' by a Machine! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 Brilliant chapter, Reo! Colleen's head in the Milshake Machine! Priceless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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