-lolly- Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 You definately need to update right now. It has to be against some rules to end it with a cliffhanger like that Pure evil Great writing though, as sad as that last paragraph was the descriptions in it were beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 THanks for all the comments guys. Next chapter will be up like an hour of 2 maybe if Roesy comes on msn, I was babysitting Olivia all after noon and then I had dancing so I couldn't finish it this afternoon. BLOODY 4Wheel Drive's!!!!! Thats another reason why me and Paulie dont like them Remind me agen why theyre so great Sam!? Great chapter, although it made me sad I nevetr said they were good and for your information my mum went looking for a new car today because she doesn't like parking the 4WD. And we only ever have 4 people in the car now. And You Samantha you told me not to hurt Ava Look what you did to Olivia xxxxxxxxxx You really think I will do anything as bad as you did? You draged it on for like 3 chapter and tried to convince me she was dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 Ha, Paul is right, 4WDs are baby killers. Rosey, that was sooo mean of you. Poor Olivia. Now Martha is going to be all depressed because she was alwayz ignoring her. You made me cry. EVIL ROSEY!! More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 i'm now onmsn..but Sam dissapeared. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 Ha, Paul is right, 4WDs are baby killers. Rosey, that was sooo mean of you. Poor Olivia. Now Martha is going to be all depressed because she was alwayz ignoring her. You made me cry. EVIL ROSEY!! More please It wan't Rosey's fault it was mine I'm sorry Rosey I wanted to change something in it so it will take abit longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 I PM'd the next chapter to Rosey just waiting too see if she approves of it before I post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 EVIL SAM!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 It's not too bad trust me the writing might suck but the chapter is ok. ROSEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY where are you? She's not replying on msn or here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 how is a 3yo kid getting hit by a 4wd not bad. well in this world, she would die instantly, then again nothing is normal in Summer Bay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 how is a 3yo kid getting hit by a 4wd not bad. well in this world, she would die instantly, then again nothing is normal in Summer Bay Yeh that may have been bad but the next chapter isn't. Where the hell is Rosey? I want to post it but she isn't on. And she wouldn't nesacarily be dead what about that little footballers daughter, he backed up over here at around that age afew yrs ago and she lived. Rosey get online now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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