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Are you trying to make me cry? That was so sad, Andy. It reminded me of 'Romeo & Juilet'

and I don't like Romeo and Juliet but I love this.

Loved how you tried a different style to this. It worked excellently. You captured the moment perfectly and I loved the flashback scene. It was great. Love your descriptive writing.

Really, really awesome job, Andy. :D

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