xsianx Posted March 22, 2007 Report Posted March 22, 2007 (edited) Beautiful! I loved reading every last word. He lay down and buried his face in the pillows, trying to suffocate the sadness away. That line was my favourite, it really stood out, for me. Brilliant Adia ! Edited May 23, 2009 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote
vale4eva Posted March 22, 2007 Report Posted March 22, 2007 Jeeze Adia, you certainly no how to tug at the heart strings! Im really sad now. That was beautifully well written. So is Martha gone!? You cant do this to me. Cant you do another one shot that shows him going after her and them getting back together lol Awww, but that really was lovely. The letter was very touching. Excellent one-shot fics, you should do more! Your a great writer Quote
Zetti Posted March 22, 2007 Report Posted March 22, 2007 Martha died in the part 1 Jack and that letter made me cry! Beautiful Quote
Tasha Posted March 22, 2007 Report Posted March 22, 2007 Martha died in part 1??? I have to go re-read that one 'cause ive forgotten it but this one was great. I have tears in my eyes oh but one thing, Jack, an apple is not going to cure a broken heart BUt other than that, it was absolutely beautiful. -wipes away tear- Greatly written Adia. Is there going to be a part 3 becuase theres a ... at the end of the last sentence I doubt it, but oh wellz Quote
Adia Posted March 23, 2007 Report Posted March 23, 2007 Awww, sorry to make everyone sad. But thankies for your lovely comments. Is there going to be a part 3 becuase theres a ... at the end of the last sentence I doubt it, but oh wellz Keep your eyes peeled... I might just have something up my sleeve... but not making any promises... Quote
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