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Thanks for the comments everyone! I appreciate it.

Here is the update:

FLETCHER HOME:

When another after shock hits, Kayla presses her face against Brad's chest. When it stops they all creep out from the shelter they made.

BRAD:

Luckily it wasn't a big one.

KAYLA:

You mean it could have been worse?

BRAD:

It could have been much worse.

KAYLA:

Oh... Thanks for... coming to get me.

BRAD:

You're my daughter.

They hug and Sally smiles.

HOLDEN/HUNTER HOME

An ambulance arrives. They lift Martha onto a stretcher and into the ambulance. Jack gets into the ambulance with her, holding her hand.

JACK:

You just hold on there, martha. Everything's going to be all right.

MARTHA:

I know. You're with me.

JACK:

And I swear, I'm never letting you go again!

LUCAS:

Dad... I'm going over to Kayla's, I want to see whether she's okay.

TONY:

All right, mate.

Mattie, Tony, Beth and Ric all go inside again.

FLETCHER HOME

Brad, Kayla, Rocco, Cassie and Sally are sitting in the living room. There is a knock on the door and Sally stands up to open it. It's Lucas. When Kayla sees him, she jumps up and runs right into his arms.

KAYLA:

You're all right!

LUCAS:

So are you, I was worried about you! You want to take a walk or something?

KAYLA:

Dad, is that okay with you?

BRAD:

Er... yeah sure...

KAYLA:

Thanks.

BRAD:

Lucas!

LUCAS:

Yeah Mr Armstrong?

BRAD:

You look after my daugter. I have a gun!

They all laugh. Lucas and Kayla leave.

CARAVAN PARK

A dark figure emirges from behind one of the vans. A cigarette drops to the ground and a foot steps on it. Johnny Cooper looks around him...

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I got a tip off from a certain person *Cough, Hanli, Cough* That you'd started to include Jack and Martha in this, so i just had to come and read it! :D (Il read anything that includes JnM. lol)

Love the whole story, its really good. Theres certainly alot going on, which makes it more exciting :)

Hope Marthas going to be ok! :( Im worried for her now.

And Kayla sounds adorable! :)

Looking forward to the next update :)

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