*~Abi~* Posted March 21, 2007 Report Share Posted March 21, 2007 ooghh blimmin hell summer bays is full of drama hope Marthas going to be ok wicked add Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted March 21, 2007 Report Share Posted March 21, 2007 Awesome update, can't wait to see what happens next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazcaz89 Posted March 21, 2007 Report Share Posted March 21, 2007 This is brill. I hope Martha is ok! Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 Thanks for the comments everyone! I appreciate it. Here is the update: FLETCHER HOME: When another after shock hits, Kayla presses her face against Brad's chest. When it stops they all creep out from the shelter they made. BRAD: Luckily it wasn't a big one. KAYLA: You mean it could have been worse? BRAD: It could have been much worse. KAYLA: Oh... Thanks for... coming to get me. BRAD: You're my daughter. They hug and Sally smiles. HOLDEN/HUNTER HOME An ambulance arrives. They lift Martha onto a stretcher and into the ambulance. Jack gets into the ambulance with her, holding her hand. JACK: You just hold on there, martha. Everything's going to be all right. MARTHA: I know. You're with me. JACK: And I swear, I'm never letting you go again! LUCAS: Dad... I'm going over to Kayla's, I want to see whether she's okay. TONY: All right, mate. Mattie, Tony, Beth and Ric all go inside again. FLETCHER HOME Brad, Kayla, Rocco, Cassie and Sally are sitting in the living room. There is a knock on the door and Sally stands up to open it. It's Lucas. When Kayla sees him, she jumps up and runs right into his arms. KAYLA: You're all right! LUCAS: So are you, I was worried about you! You want to take a walk or something? KAYLA: Dad, is that okay with you? BRAD: Er... yeah sure... KAYLA: Thanks. BRAD: Lucas! LUCAS: Yeah Mr Armstrong? BRAD: You look after my daugter. I have a gun! They all laugh. Lucas and Kayla leave. CARAVAN PARK A dark figure emirges from behind one of the vans. A cigarette drops to the ground and a foot steps on it. Johnny Cooper looks around him... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 No, bad Johnny, *get large stick and goes to whack johnny*, Love the update, Yay Kayla and Brad are getting along , update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 Johnny is there for a VERY good reason and that's all I'm saying... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 Johnny is there for a VERY good reason and that's all I'm saying... meanie, he better not cause too much trouble, but then again wheres a good story with out trouble.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 BRAD: You look after my daugter. I have a gun! I love that quote... and I loved the update too. Looks like darks days ahead if Johnny's back in town. Please update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazcaz89 Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 RRRRRRRRRR Brad and Kayla are so cute. I can't believe Johnny is there!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 I got a tip off from a certain person *Cough, Hanli, Cough* That you'd started to include Jack and Martha in this, so i just had to come and read it! (Il read anything that includes JnM. lol) Love the whole story, its really good. Theres certainly alot going on, which makes it more exciting Hope Marthas going to be ok! Im worried for her now. And Kayla sounds adorable! Looking forward to the next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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