jackandmarthaforever!! Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Wow!! You never wrote one shots before? That was fantastically written. I felt I was in Martha's mind when you described her emotions. That was really sad. Poor Martha!! Well done!! I loved it. Quote
Adia Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Awww, thank you. I was quite nervous because it was my first one! So thanks for your really nice comment! Quote
vale4eva Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 (edited) Wow! That was amazing! Extremely well written, The letter was beautiful. Its made me quite sad now You should defo do more one shots if you get chance, your excellent at it! Well done It was fantastic Edited March 3, 2007 by vale4eva Quote
sarahandkatie Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 That was super duper. I wish it wasn't a short story I want it to continue to see if her hopes are correct. Quote
allibaz91 Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Lol wow! (told you I'd get reading ) This is fantastic - I'm not normally a JM pusher but right now I want them to get back together soooo badly it's beyond a joke!! Which means you must have done a good job I love it, the writing style and detail was awesome, and you got me hooked! I wish there was more. Great job! Quote
baby gurl Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 OMG!!! Wow that was amazing...When I was reading it I thought Jack was dead Then I read it and I was like dam Jack leave Sam and Rory and get back with Martha...You described things amazingly (sp) That was beautifly (sp) written...xxx Quote
-lolly- Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 That was fantastic! Great writing and descriptions and.. everything!! That letter was beautiful as well it made me want to cry *thumbs up* Quote
Adia Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Aww, thanks you guys! Your comments are so nice. I did think of continuing it, like to show Jack's side of things or something, but then I thought nah. Lol, maybe I'll do another one shot like a sequel... Thanks heaps! Quote
allibaz91 Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Lol i think you definitely should write a sequel - I'd read it!! :D Quote
beckyboo Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Wow! Im confused by that letter though This is Fab considering you cant write one shots This is soo good You really should continue I feel so sorry for Martha! Quote
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