Oxidizer Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 WOW! That is the most awesome fic I've read so far! I love all the twists and flashbacks etc. - I can't wait until Part III! Wickedly awesome Rabsey! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kase Posted June 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 That was brilliant! Please continue, you are such a great writer! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 This is really good! Can't wait to read more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 Awesome! Cant wait to read more! The suppsense is killing me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Thanks for all of the excellent comments everyone. The next part is going to be the last part so I want to make sure that it's good. It might be a while so I'll leave you with a little teaser. "Have you got any food?" She asked restlessly. "Uh, there should be some M&M's in the glove box." Zoe opened the glove box and rooted around until she found a half full bag of candy. "SCORE!" She cried victoriously. "Not that you need the sugar." Tracey added. Watching Zoe bounce in her seat and wolf down handfuls of chocolate. "God, I'm starving. Prison food sucks! It's like you kill a couple of people and suddenly you don't deserve food that has a taste anymore." Zoe remarked. "Hey, you remember that time when we were throwing the peanut M&M's at each other and trying to catch them in our mouths and you fell off your chair and broke your tooth? That was fun." Realizing that that sounded a little insensitive, Zoe clarified. "The M&M throwing, not the teeth breaking." Running her tongue over the gap in her front teeth that still existed, Tracey reached over and flicked on the radio. "Yeah." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Hehe that's such an awesome teaser! You take your time - I'm sure it'll be amazing! That part kinda seems like after she escaped from the paddy wagon *is excited* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lauz Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Oooooooooooohh a teaser!!! You shouldn't have, now I'm all pumped for the final part. Better make it a long one Looking foward to it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 (edited) That part kinda seems like after she escaped from the paddy wagon *is excited* That's because it is after she escapes. *shares your excitement* . I just don't want to pull a Dan Bennet and ruin the story with an ending that makes you all go "What the f*ck is this sh*t?" The last part will probably be up in the next two days, so until then I've put up my Zoe/Kim fic to tide you over ;). The link's in my sig. Edited June 30, 2006 by luckyrabbit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 OMG I cant wait for Part 3!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Love it. Cant wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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