Flammable (by Oxidizer) - comments

[swfc]

Brilliant, as always. Loved every bit of it. BTW, is Stephen Thompson related to a certain Detective we all know and love by any chance?

Nicky and Eve... So cute.... The poor rabbit to be honest. Poor Eve. Somehow, that whole entire scene played out in my head....

Beautifully written.

[luckyrabbit]

Poor rabbit, poor Eve, poor Nicky.

Now that that's out of the way, THAT WAS AWESOME! Jealous!Eve rocks and it's so in character for her to be so possessive over Nicky, even at that age.

Great job

[Cerise]

I loved it! Poor Rabbit though, I could see it burning in my Head. *shudders* Awesome writing

[Oxidizer]

BTW, is Stephen Thompson related to a certain Detective we all know and love by any chance?

That'd be Tracey's dad alright.

Thanks for the awesome feedback! Glad that you enjoyed it.

Edited January 11, 2007 by Oxidizer

[Zetti]

really good!

i wil reading more updates of this!

[Traceve]

That was awesome Andy! Poor Rabbit! I could play that scene in my head.. rather disturbing

[carmelle]

That was brilliant. Im still trynna block out the rabbit images. Poor animal! You're an awesome writer.

[Oxidizer]

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

[Sarah_Lewis]

Andy !! that was great in fact it was awesome your a good writer =p update soooooon

[Oxidizer]

Thanks!

This is a oneshot so no more parts. I doubt there'll be a sequel either, but you never know...