swfc Posted January 11, 2007 Report Share Posted January 11, 2007 Brilliant, as always. Loved every bit of it. BTW, is Stephen Thompson related to a certain Detective we all know and love by any chance? Nicky and Eve... So cute.... The poor rabbit to be honest. Poor Eve. Somehow, that whole entire scene played out in my head.... Beautifully written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted January 11, 2007 Report Share Posted January 11, 2007 Poor rabbit, poor Eve, poor Nicky. Now that that's out of the way, THAT WAS AWESOME! Jealous!Eve rocks and it's so in character for her to be so possessive over Nicky, even at that age. Great job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted January 11, 2007 Report Share Posted January 11, 2007 I loved it! Poor Rabbit though, I could see it burning in my Head. *shudders* Awesome writing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 11, 2007 Report Share Posted January 11, 2007 (edited) BTW, is Stephen Thompson related to a certain Detective we all know and love by any chance? That'd be Tracey's dad alright. Thanks for the awesome feedback! Glad that you enjoyed it. Edited January 11, 2007 by Oxidizer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 11, 2007 Report Share Posted January 11, 2007 really good! i wil reading more updates of this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted January 13, 2007 Report Share Posted January 13, 2007 That was awesome Andy! Poor Rabbit! I could play that scene in my head.. rather disturbing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carmelle Posted January 13, 2007 Report Share Posted January 13, 2007 That was brilliant. Im still trynna block out the rabbit images. Poor animal! You're an awesome writer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 13, 2007 Report Share Posted January 13, 2007 Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted January 14, 2007 Report Share Posted January 14, 2007 Andy !! that was great in fact it was awesome your a good writer =p update soooooon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 16, 2007 Report Share Posted January 16, 2007 Thanks! This is a oneshot so no more parts. I doubt there'll be a sequel either, but you never know... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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