sarahandkatie Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 I'm really likeing this already, it's not like any other fic I've read on the forum. I hope they survive, I can just see this being a home and away version of lost. can't wait to read more. This is exactly what I was thinking (and kinda hoping) he he! Lost is back to night yey! update soon please. I'm getting rather inpatient waiting he he! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 wow!! i didn't think that i would get all these comments back!! hopefully i can write the second chapter soon...i'm just doing some revision on the computer on shakespeare (how fun!!) i'm going to london on tuesday night and won't be back till friday night so there won't be any update between then...but until i go you will definatly hopefully get some updates till then! btw who ever doesn't already call me fuj! xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 thanks for the replies guys heres the next chapter...enjoy!!! ____________ Chapter 2 The plane had stopped moving. There was silence. Martha could see many bodies many dead but among the dead ones she could make out the ones in pain. She then remembered. “Jack.” She cried. She instantly saw Jack moving over to her. “Its ok.” He soothed. “Where are we?” Martha asked scared. “I don’t know.” He told her truthfully. “All I can see out the window is bushes.” He added. “Oh God.” She sighed softly. “We’re lost in the middle of nowhere.” “Hey don’t worry we’ll be out here in no time.” He reassured. “Aaaagh.” Martha groaned in pain. “Where does it hurt?” Jack asked concerned. “My head.” She told him weakly. “Its bleeding but you’ll be fine.” He assured. ______ “Martha nearly everyone’s dead or is badly injured.” Jack told her. “What?” She asked shocked. “I think we should try and get out of the plane and find a way out of the bushes.” “But Jack, we don’t know where we are or…” Martha told him. “I know but its better than staying here. What do you think?” “Ok.” Martha agreed. ______ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 That was damn awesome, hope everyone's okay!!! Update sson !! Please =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarahandkatie Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 yey an update, was hoping it was going to be longer but it's keeping me on the edge of my seat as the teletubbbies say 'GAIN, AGAIN'. he he. Hope the next ones soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jackandmarthaforever!! Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Oh gosh everyone's dead. Just a question were they on the plane with people from summer bay like luc,mattie,alf,beth etc or just other random people? This is really gripping. I wonder if they'll get home quickly or will there be something stopping them? Great writing. I hope Martha's head is okay. lol. Anyway I really enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next updates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Ooo! Shes going to be lost. In the middle of know where. Alone. With Jack! Thats my kinda place I am so envious of her right now Great writing Fuj! Cant wait to see what happens next... Maybe they could start walking through the bush together, and all of a sudden it starts to rain, they huddle inside a small crevis and.......oh wait i best not let my imagination get the better of me After all, this is a forum for all ages! Anyway, looking forward to the next one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BritishFan Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 OooooO...u updated with the next chapter. Great chapter Fuj...I wonder where the story is going to lead...how long will they be LOST for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Thanks guys next chapter hopefully tomorrow...x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Ooo! Shes going to be lost. In the middle of know where. Alone. With Jack! Thats my kinda place I am so envious of her right now Me too, she's so lucky. I'm likeing where this is heading. Thanks guys next chapter hopefully tomorrow...x can't wait to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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