I love music Posted December 21, 2006 Report Share Posted December 21, 2006 Thanks I kind of tried to leave the ending a bit open (I didn't write that Jade died till example) so the reader could imagine. Did she just just in to the water to swim after the light? Did she die? Was she rescued? I don't know. I'm glad you liked it And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you? I have been wondering for such a long time, because it sounds so wrong and "Norwegianized" in my head. Oh, she was rescued in my version. And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you? No, it's "for example". But your English is great anyway! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted December 21, 2006 Report Share Posted December 21, 2006 Oh, she was rescued in my version. And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you? No, it's "for example". But your English is great anyway! Thanks At the moment it's not good at all, because I don't have spelling and grammar control on my computer, and I have my dictionary in my locker at school... I used "for example" for a while, but I thought it sounded even more weird, and "Norwegianized". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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