Eli Posted January 18, 2007 Report Share Posted January 18, 2007 I loved this chapter too! I had tears in my eyes, it was really beautifully written! That night dragged longer than any other night. Flynn was laid in bed. He looked so fragile beneath the blanket, I feared touching him incase he broke and I'd be the one responsible for taking him away. I sat myself gently on the bed and gripped his hand. He just looked at me and smiled. We said nothing. Only silence filled the room, but it was a beautiful silence. The first paragraph was the best IMO, it was really well written! Can't wait for the next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted January 18, 2007 Report Share Posted January 18, 2007 Amy that was beautiful! I had tears in my eyes. I miss Flynn It's shame there aren't many Flynn fics around. I love your writing in this because the description is so good you don't need any dialog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted January 18, 2007 Report Share Posted January 18, 2007 This is a really great fic. It's so sad, but I love how you've written Sally's emotions and perspective, and you've described everything so perfectly. I feared touching him incase he broke and I'd be the one responsible for taking him away. That was a really great line and made me teary. Please update again soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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