Nicom Posted September 20, 2006 Report Share Posted September 20, 2006 (edited) Who's in danger? To be honest, I don't have a flippin' clue. Oh wait, I do have an idea.... It's like the show! Martha and Jack squabbling over him working late... it's just a universal problem for Jack isn't it? He can't get it right in the programme, nor in fics. It's causing him more damn grief.. maybe he should quit. More soon! Edited September 20, 2006 by Nicom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGlowingAngelx Posted September 20, 2006 Report Share Posted September 20, 2006 OMG, Stupid Jack. He should know by now that Martha's not happy about him woring late. Idiot! And what on earth is Harper playing at? What if she had been in labour? urggh. it doesn't bear thinking about! Anyway, love it as usual, Can't wait for the rest! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted September 20, 2006 Report Share Posted September 20, 2006 OMG, Stupid Jack. He should know by now that Martha's not happy about him woring late. Idiot! And what on earth is Harper playing at? What if she had been in labour? urggh. it doesn't bear thinking about! Anyway, love it as usual, Can't wait for the rest! Hey i agree with all that LOL!!!!!! great update Update ASAP!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Great chapter. Please let Martha be alright. Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Go Martha and Kit. Even though it's probably not the smartest thing to argue with a guy with a gun their comments were funny! I hope no-one got shot unless the robber shot himself.... Please update again soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 The clever thing to do would be to go in.. not stand at the door going "Oh, that was a gun shot! Cool." Actually, then again, it wouldn't be so clever... :S I didn't see THAT coming let me tell you! I thought the robber would come after Jack. Lol. Well, this is all wowza, but I want to know why you're doing it.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Blimey! Did NOT see that coming! Martha! How dumb can you get girly...who is smart ass when a guy is standing at you point a gun?! Great chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Martha should have kept her clap trap shut! And so should you Nicole! I just read your comments about sad endings and I'm telling you if you give bay girl any ideas I'll get you Just read both chapters and they were great! Elvis It's a lot better than having to refer to someone as 'the man' lol. Anyway, it's getting intense so I can't wait for the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Great chapter. i hope nobody has been shot. Please update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted September 21, 2006 Report Share Posted September 21, 2006 Thanks for ending the chapter on such a cliffhanger...not! I'm loving the name Elvis for the bad guy. I love the irony too; Elvis the singer is dead and I'm sure this villan will be too if Martha is hurt! Anyway, can't wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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