xGlowingAngelx Posted July 20, 2006 Report Posted July 20, 2006 I love this. Every time I read it, I want to cry. It's so sad but brilliant. The emotions are perfectly written. Well done!! Quote
Skykat Posted July 20, 2006 Report Posted July 20, 2006 Really well written and certainly not what I expected from such a Jack and Martha lover. I really was expecting the typical happy ending but I loved the twist at the end. What I really liked about this fic was that you really managed to catch how the characters were feeling and I love your descriptions as well, particulary the opening paragraph. Well done.xx Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 (edited) I have to make a confession, when i first read it i didn't read it all becasue i couldn't bring myself to get to the end, i glanced at it but i didn't actually try to read it. And now that i have i want to cry...A LOT! Although i love that it's different from all the happy endings it's still very depressing There is nothing more i can say about your writing other than how amazing and descriprive it is. You really captured the emotion in the story and my heart truly sunk when she was talking about how empty she felt. Well done on another brilliant fic. xx Edited July 21, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote
-Jade- Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 I have to make a confession, when i first read it i didn't read it all becasue i couldn't bring myself to get to the end, i glanced at it but i didn't actually try to read it. And now that i have i want to cry...A LOT! Although i love that it's different from all the happy endings it's still very depressing There is nothing more i can say about your writing other than how amazing and descriprive it is. You really captured the emotion in the story and my heart truly sunk when she was talking about how empty she felt. Well done on another brilliant fic. xx You never read it all!!!!! Krystal!!! Quote
-Annie- Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 (edited) Gorgeous work jackandmartha!!! You know I love your stuff! You're very talented! Edited August 30, 2006 by xAnniex Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 That was just fantastic! Definitely not what i was expecting at the end, which was good actually because it left me really trying to understand why Martha would leave Jack when she should need his support. But i suppose everyone deals with their own grief in different ways, and you put that across perfectly. Well done, I hope more fics are on the way Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 You never read it all!!!!! Krystal!!! I did but i glanced over the sad bits. It's not my fault that your so good you make me cry! Quote
ldscott Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 That was brilliant! Shame they broke up though, but it was very true to life Well done! Quote
tasha7905 Posted July 21, 2006 Report Posted July 21, 2006 That was fantastically written. I have tears rolling down my face. I feel so sorry for both of them. Great work. Quote
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