Skykat Posted September 5, 2006 Report Share Posted September 5, 2006 I can only reiterate what I wrote in the thread JackandMartha!!! I really enjoyed reading this. A superb entry.xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Wow! When I first read this fic, it was during the Challenge, so my mind was set on judging according to the rules and guidelines. But, reading it now with no limitations, the story is amazing and ten times better! There we go, an honest opinion. ;) This is definitely one of your best fics jackandmartha!!! Nice work. *Pats on back* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Great fic. Loved it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 That was really great. You described everything perfectly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 I enjoyed this story, I really did. I thought the emotive language used was stunning, and the feelings described were so real to me. In saying that, some moments felt as if they were repeating ones that have had before. But it kind of worked. I did love the openendeedness of the story though, I thought it worked well... and because of that, I don't feel the need for a sequel, because its better to leave people guessing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 I really liked this aswell, that was really good emotive and captive writing. Well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks for all your comments guys - they are much appreciated. And Jess, thanks, as always for your fair and honest opinion, I agree with you about the repetitiveness. If I wasn't lazy, I would try and just work over it a bit but I can't be bothered (my laziness is terrible isn't it? lol). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Brilliant! Well done, your writing is incredible! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 What a smashing fic. Brilliant stuff girly. Well done. However, a sequel is vital. Sevenpudd's, I disagree majorly. Leaving people guessing is not a good thing!! I want to know what happens! *stamps feet* This is going to be one of those things that I'll never stop nagging you about you know? Aren't you glad you wrote this fic? lol. Seriously though, fantastic piece of writing. I enjoyed a piece of writing that wasn't JM! Fancy that.. lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 ^Yes, yes, I agree Nicole! I"lll help nag...*rubs hands together* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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