-ParaisGal- Posted November 8, 2006 Report Share Posted November 8, 2006 OMG, this is like, great. But get Mac and Jack back together soon, please? *Begs* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kase Posted November 8, 2006 Report Share Posted November 8, 2006 Wow! I'm hooked already Emmasi. I am so intrigued by where you are going with this story and I love how you've connected Jack and Ash's past with Emily Chambers, and also to Sam and Ash now. Can't wait to see where this is going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 8, 2006 Report Share Posted November 8, 2006 I love this! Corey was mentioned!! may be not for the right reasons but still... Corey is better than Ash and Jack. I think Ash has a connection with Emily on the show could be interesting... Great writing. Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 8, 2006 Report Share Posted November 8, 2006 OMG, this is like, great. But get Mac and Jack back together soon, please? *Begs* Agree with you 100% *and begs more* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted November 9, 2006 Report Share Posted November 9, 2006 (edited) Someone told me to read this fic, and I'm so glad they did. Ash got shot!! Ha ha! Die freaky-ass-boy! I've read at least one fic by you before emmasi and I knew you were good, but you're great! Your writing is fabulous! I think one of the best I've seen on the board so far. Please update soon! Edited November 9, 2006 by Nicom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bella Posted November 12, 2006 Report Share Posted November 12, 2006 freaky-ass-boy? LMFAO! Well I finally read your fic, Jem. Brilliant read, honestly. I like your style. I also like Sam/Jack *is scared...what are you doing to me?!* Seriously, though. You have to write more. The connections between Emily/Jack/Ash/Sam are interesting and I could see this occuring on the actual show. Great backstory you have going on here. Goes without saying - update. Pretty please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 12, 2006 Report Share Posted November 12, 2006 WOW! That was seriously Amazing! That is one seriously mixed up family lol Corey is one die-hard nutter....but I still love him A happy-ish ending. Jack and Martha re reunited. The family are back together Your writing has kept me hooked from the very first word to the last. Well done for writing a brilliant fic. You were really good at describing the scenes and how each person was feeling and you kept there characters real and fresh. Sad that its ending. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emmasi Posted November 12, 2006 Report Share Posted November 12, 2006 Aw thanks. I still love Corey too. I didn't like that ending for him, but I wanted to keep the J&M fans happy. I figured they deserved it after all I put them through Yeah, I kind of feel like it had more in it, but I really couldn't think of anything else to write, lol, and I wanted to finish it so I could get back to my other fic. I haven't edited that part yet cause it's so long and I only just finished it at 4.30am . But I was so excited for finihishing it that I just HAD to post it, lol. I'll clean it up and move it into the library tomorrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted November 12, 2006 Report Share Posted November 12, 2006 God you're so clever! Lol. Wow! That's great! And I love the fact that Jack and Martha are back together! I didn't see that coming to be truly honest! Lol. I seriously thought you were going to kill them! Wow! God that was amazing. My tummy's gone a bit weird... the thought of the rock killing Jack though. Err Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bella Posted November 14, 2006 Report Share Posted November 14, 2006 Duuuuuuuuuuuude! Why aren't you a script writer? Well done. That was brilliant, really brilliant. Oh the suspense. Oh the horror. Oh the...brilliant-ness! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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