ILOVEASH Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 I am loving this story, keep up the good work! U ever thought about writing the scripts for H&A?? hahahahaha somehow, I don't think I'd be allowed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 LOL, I' d missed this update...LOL, so hilarious! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 Yay, Jack and Martha are stuck in the hay together They can kiss and make up now That was funny. Brad is so funny Im starting to enjoy this Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILOVEASH Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 NEVER SAY NEVER PART 5: Having heard about the disaster over at Sally's place, Mattie stuffed her face into a box of lamingtons and left the Hunter/Holden residence. She made her way over to the hay filled house, were she was greeted by a shocked Beth, who waved Martha's note in the air and yelled "Mattie! I don't believe this!" Ignoring her psycho mum, Mattie continued to walk towards the door of the house. On her way, she noticed Brad and Sally sitting in the middle of the driveway, holding scissors and covered in glue and paper. Mattie could see that they were cutting out photos of themselves and making lockets for eachother. Matilda moved towards the front door and peered inside the house. What she was about to see was a sight that would haunt her forever. Mountains of hay, burying multiple friends, cows laying in their own poo, an enraged Macca emptying the fridge in search for beer and a confused Kim running around the border of the room, still pushing the hospital bed. Mattie watched as Alf awoke, and she walked over to him, trying to avoid being hit by Kim. Mattie was about to ask Alf how any of this had happened, when Alf yelled at the top of his voice "Flamin' party drugs! Kim has been charging around the lounge for hours!" Just as Mattie leant over to give Alf her hand, a gust of wind blew through the already-broken kitchen window, knocking over Matilda,Macca and Kim, and most importanty, MESSING UP MATTIE'S HAIR. "Cyclone!" Martha called, as she lifted her head high enough to catch sight of Cassie's skinny body flying around out the window. "I don't believe this!" came a voice from outside. TO BE CONTINUED... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 LOL, I loved the whole, i don't believe this! Everytime she says it I fall out of my chaoir! I have a very sore head... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 lol...that was hilarious Im really enjoying this. Wheres Jack btw??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILOVEASH Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 He's under the hay somewhere, I'll put him in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 Yipee!! Isnt he with Martha yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILOVEASH Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 No, i think it'll be awfully hard to find eachother amongst the hay.haha Only time will tell... do you know how i can change the title of my fanfic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 well. this is the most strnagest fic i've ever seen. not sure if i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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