Adia Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 (edited) Wow. I loved it. It was so beautifully written. I especially loved these lines: "You told me Sal, that without love, life isnt worth anything, so sometimes you have to put yourself out there and take the risk of your heart breaking, because love is what life is all about." and "I cant promise you I will out live you but I can promise that I love you with all my heart and that if you give me yours I will never break it, I wont even chip or scratch it." He is looking deep into my eyes and I know he is genuine. "I love you Sally" he finishes. Such sweet and thoughtful things to say... Edited May 22, 2010 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelRose Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 Wonderful! As it's a one-shot, do you want me to have a go at moving it for you? Be sure you have a copy if you say yes though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 (edited) Yea go for it Angelrose thanks. I have a copy so its ok Thanks for the comments you two, i enjoyed writing it. Edited November 2, 2006 by tasha7905 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelRose Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 Ok, here goes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 Thanks for moving it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 Wow, great work Tash! Where do you get your ideas from? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 A beautifully written one shot Tasha, I loved it the emotion from Sally and Ric's advice was perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 (edited) Thanks Jackie glad you liked it. Thanks Skykat. I have no idea where they come from. I decided last night that I would write something but not about the ones i usually use ie Lucas and Matilda. I really like Sally, so thought about ideas for her and that is what I came up with. Edited November 2, 2006 by tasha7905 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelRose Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 Thanks for moving it. You're quite welcome, but thank SKYKAT to; she got me out of a hole! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted November 2, 2006 Report Share Posted November 2, 2006 This is beautiful! I had tears in my eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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