I love music Posted October 22, 2006 Report Posted October 22, 2006 Well I thought I'd post this here - it's a one shot I wrote for the fanfic competition. Reviews are welcome with constructive critisicm or compliments. Thanks to I Love Music and Skykat for proofing - you guys were a lot of help! It was a pleasure, Jade. Like I said when I first read the fic, it made me cry, especially the "come back" at the end. Brilliant story! Quote
Skykat Posted October 22, 2006 Report Posted October 22, 2006 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I agree with ILM. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was a beautifully, well written piece. I cried the first time I read it and it still gets me when I read it now. The introduction, that heart breaking ending, Flynn's words to her, her reactions. You got it just about perfect Jade. A really beautiful piece of writing, really believable and genuine. I loved every word. Well done.xx Quote
MarMar Posted October 22, 2006 Report Posted October 22, 2006 I have never been a big fan-fic reader, but skimming through the newest posts, this thread caught my eye, and I'm glad it did. I love reading fiction with so many images as the ones you have here. I like it when writers care enough to write how the surroundings are, like you did at the begining - how she walked across the floor, the thud when she landed on the sofa etc. Thank you! It made me cry. Quote
-Jade- Posted October 22, 2006 Report Posted October 22, 2006 (edited) Thank you, I'm glad you liked it - your comments are really appreciated! Edited October 22, 2006 by jackandmartha!!! Quote
-Laura- Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 Well after being so impressed by your writing in your fic trapped i thought i would have a nose at some of your others and this was absolutely fantastic! It was so well written! Everything about it was just perfect! The emotion, the descriptions, everything! It brought a tear to my eye! lol Great writing Jade! Quote
-Jade- Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 Well after being so impressed by your writing in your fic trapped i thought i would have a nose at some of your others and this was absolutely fantastic! It was so well written! Everything about it was just perfect! The emotion, the descriptions, everything! It brought a tear to my eye! lol Great writing Jade! Thanks Laura. Again. Quote
Eli Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 That was so amazingly well written!! You made me cry, it's so sad and so beautiful! Quote
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