Guest Posted September 29, 2006 Report Share Posted September 29, 2006 That is so cool and Kirsty sounds cute I don't like Rhys but overall I love it and don't worry about me not liking Rhys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted September 29, 2006 Report Share Posted September 29, 2006 (edited) A thousand stars, sparkling and glistening, dotted the dark sky. They must have shone down like this on lonely kids forever. Tears blurred his vision and he began a game of joining them into pictures. Kane's tugging at the heart strings once again, just as he always does in your stories. That was beautiful description though, I felt so sorry for him, poor baby! She ran in and out of the kitchen in between mouthfuls of toast and cereal and spilled orange juice all over the breakfast table because she suddenly felt she had to jump up and show Dani exactly how she scored the goal when she'd joined in the boys' game at recess. "Ewww, Kirsty always wants to be with boring boys," said Jade, wrinkling her nose. That is so how I imagine Kirsty and Jade being as children. You've got them exactly right, especially Kirsty. I love her already! Dad would kill him. Uh oh...Kirsty you need to go and save Kane now! I see trouble ahead... Edited September 29, 2006 by SKYKAT Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Tess- Posted September 30, 2006 Report Share Posted September 30, 2006 oh! This is soooo sweet! I can just imagine it Great start Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted September 30, 2006 Report Share Posted September 30, 2006 Great chapter ILM, love the chilhood innocence of their bond. Great work.xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted October 1, 2006 Report Share Posted October 1, 2006 Yeah, I'm imagining all this. Pooooooooooorrrrr Kane. Good thing Kirsty's weird enough to like him, LOL. He just wants a normal family, poor thing. HA!!! The Sutherland girls are so cute!! How old's Dani s'posed to be? Great writing so far!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted October 1, 2006 Report Share Posted October 1, 2006 Uh oh! Kursty's date was so funny! Great chapter ILM.xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annette Posted October 2, 2006 Report Share Posted October 2, 2006 Nice to see this posted on BTTB, it's my favourite fanfic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chair Posted October 2, 2006 Report Share Posted October 2, 2006 Thanks. It's great to see the Sutherlands and Kane when they are little. I'm really enjoying this so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted October 2, 2006 Report Share Posted October 2, 2006 Thanks, need to get an early night tonight - had a very busy day - but I'll try and post the next chapter either tomorrow or Wednesday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tamminmad Posted October 5, 2006 Report Share Posted October 5, 2006 hey this is a great fan fic hope you can update it soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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