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  • 2 weeks later...

That was good. But how did Angie get the blood on her face? I presume funeral attendants do come and knock on the door because they come and get you from the house, and otherwise you might not realise they had arrived!

OOps, I was just about to go to bed but came back...

She was pressing her forehead against the stair rail while she was listening to her Mum's phone call to Uncle Jason. :)

Thanks for reading. Going off to bed now! :)

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Fantastic chapter. This is so believable and the descriptions are so vivid I can just picture it. Poor Angie and Josie for that matter. I love your style of writing, please post again soon. Kat.xx

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What a great conclusion! Somehow I'm not that surprised about Uncle Jason, like Anette said it made everything make sense. Makes you really feel for Angie. A great story and really realistic, look forward to reading more of your stuff soon!xx

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