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:D THAT WAS GREAT! Okay, so two sins down, five sins to go....and I have to say, the way you write is INCREDIBLE! I know it's in first person pov, but by the wicked cool trickery of my mind, it plays out like I'm really watching the scene, and that's seriously great! I mean the story, not the trickery ;) I could definitely see this couple, and am looking forward to the third sin :D Great work!
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Yeah...these comments get repetitive when each chapter is so damn good. I just have to say, you've captured these characters perfectly. I could imagine that scene in my head, Belle being angry, Drew being a smartarse, and everything in between. Keep writing, I am so enthralled!

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Yeah...these comments get repetitive when each chapter is so damn good. I just have to say, you've captured these characters perfectly.

Yup I agree ^^. Jess, I swear I get boring saying this all the time, but your writing is seriously amazing and that was hot. I'm loving this pairing even more now and as Kase said you portray their characters so well. You're actually making me like Belle and her stubborn nature, despite the fact that she pisses me off in the show. You have talent and you better not stop writing. But then again, I don't think you sould stop writing. :P Please update as soon as you can! I'll be waiting for the next installment or sin. :)

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Jess, goes without saying that I love this. Chemistry is incredible, I can really feel it. The only thing I can possible criticise about your stories is that you end them but the minute one is over you come straight back with something just as good so I can't even complain about that! Keep it coming hun.xx

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