-michelle- Posted May 27, 2006 Report Share Posted May 27, 2006 Brilliant fan fic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bell Posted May 27, 2006 Report Share Posted May 27, 2006 wow it was so good, im so pleased that you finished it like that cause if they lived happily ever after i wouldnt have suited it as much i dont think, anyway *wipes tears away* keep writing cause you are really rather good in my opinion, and everyone elses it seems, it was so lovely brilliantly written, thankyou xxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted May 27, 2006 Report Share Posted May 27, 2006 That was so emotional. I couldnt stop the tears coming. Poor Jack losing martha, but at least he has Matt. I like the fact that it is still the Holden men. Great writing, I cant wait to see what fic you come up with next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_lover11 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 great job. It was sad but great Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 OMG I'm baulling my eyes out, and I can hardly see the computer screen, amazing work Nicole, no many stories can make me cry as much as I am now, at the start of the chapter I expected that Marth would come home through the door and then it would be Jack, Martha and Matt going for a walk as a family, but then when he came to the grave stone and started talking it hit me, and really hard. Now I know what it feels like to read a story you love and then someone dies, I've written them before and people are just like, 'I didn't see it coming', so I guess me crying serves me right. But I can see why you chose to write it the way you did, not all stories can end happily, even if it's nice when they do. But you did a really great job writting that, as sad as it was, (a good sad not a bad one) it was really beautiful. OMG I really can't stop crying, and once again your a brilliant writter, well done. Hope you keep writing more fanfiction, cause your really good at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 Omg i love all your fan fics but this is your best by far Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelgirl Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 Wow,I was crying reading it,that was beautiful!Well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotchoc Posted May 29, 2006 Report Share Posted May 29, 2006 OMG that was beautiful,i just read the whole story at once but i'm in tears now.....*sniffs* Beautifully written Nicole! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted December 4, 2006 Report Share Posted December 4, 2006 do you know how much i want to cry???????? that was soooooo sad.....that was brilliant writing....i cant believe martha died...i loved jack when he was talking to the grave stone....it was sooo sad....i feel like crying....why did you do this to me?? i loved the whole fic.....xxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted December 4, 2006 Report Share Posted December 4, 2006 Lol. Thanks. If it helps, I cried too. lol I'm such a wuss... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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