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Yep i agree...you can't leave it there; it is too good, in a good way lol :D

i laughed so hard at Jack talking to the coffee machine, i just imagined him using the same tone of voice as he used that day at the races when he phoned Martha "Martha darling, its Jack speaking, where are you?"...i imagined Jack saying something like "Why thank you ever so much Mr coffee maker, how kind of you." and in front of a room full of patients too lol that was hilarious lol

Well written :D

I didn't think of that at first, but after reading your post i was lmao. I can imagine that too. Anyway that was fabulous Nicole. Can you get any better? Actually you probably can lol, what an explosive storyline (if my guesses are correct) Please update soon!!!

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Wow thanks! :) That's alot of comments! Each one very much appreciated!!

I shall try and post the next one on later, that's if I can get the next chapter proof read, by the amazing jackandmartha!!! . :)

I've just realised, to write this fic I have to have "All Time Love" on repeat.. lol. :P Wierd.. lol

Anyway, thanks for the comments! :D

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