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All i can say is what an intruiguing and explosive start! You have real talent for not only writing but also making up all these fab plots! I don't know you do it! Please update really really soon - i want to see Martha's reaction! Oh yea and one more thing... how could you just leave it there?! Meany...lol :P

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Yep i agree...you can't leave it there; it is too good, in a good way lol :D

i laughed so hard at Jack talking to the coffee machine, i just imagined him using the same tone of voice as he used that day at the races when he phoned Martha "Martha darling, its Jack speaking, where are you?"...i imagined Jack saying something like "Why thank you ever so much Mr coffee maker, how kind of you." and in front of a room full of patients too lol that was hilarious lol

Well written :D

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