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I'm glad you decided you liked this after all. You didn't have much confidence in it when you first sent it to me. :P

I don't know why though because it's a great piece of writing, Matilda is just how she was in the beginning, remember her crush over Kim? It reminded me of that, you got her spot on and Jade and Nick, that was so sad, they were so meant to be together but I think you had the right ending in the end. I definitely got a sense that there had been so much hurt it was impossible to go back.

Really great work Jess, loved reading it again.

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Wow! That was so breathtakingly good Jess. I kinda lost the love for Jade and Nick after how their characters turned out, but that really brought it all back. I believed every word of it. You captured Jade completely. Her thoughts, her feelings for Nick, even her sorta-step-sisterly relationship with Matilda. Brilliant piece of work :)

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Great! That was brilliant! :D

I loved it, really kept me involved all the way through. (That's good, because I have a crap attention span. :P)

I, too, loved the fact that you merged two classic past teenagers, with a present one. Fantastic stuff.

*says passionately* I felt the emotion. :P

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