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You know Nicole what you wrote at the begginig of the chapter made no sense to me, not only was it writen excellently (as usual) but what are you changing? Anyway i'm very glad Callum didn't find the mobile but poor Martha having to have him touch her .......... URGH!!! Great chapter can't wait for the update.

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