tasha7905 Posted November 1, 2006 Report Share Posted November 1, 2006 Great chapters, I love the twist that Martha is pregnant. I wonder if she will tell anyone while she is missing. Cant wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Natasha~ Posted November 1, 2006 Report Share Posted November 1, 2006 I'm sorry, my computer is broke so I can't update for a while (Few days or maybe a week). I'm on the school laptops now so I can't update now. Sorry xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catty Posted November 9, 2006 Report Share Posted November 9, 2006 Hey, grait fanfic..pleace update soon.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 9, 2006 Report Share Posted November 9, 2006 I'm sorry, my computer is broke so I can't update for a while (Few days or maybe a week). I'm on the school laptops now so I can't update now. Sorry xxx Damn computers! Mine is being a moody so and so! Update when you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 Ooohhh, sometimes our computer's mouse won't work, or the screen, or something like that...annoys me HEAPS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Natasha~ Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 Sorry for the long wait. Secret Heartache ‘At Least We Are All Alive’ “HE’s DEAD!” Belle screams while placing her jacket on top of him. “What are we going to do?” She shouts as she walks around in circles around what Belle thought was Colin’s dead body. “He can’t be” Robbie removes the jacket and tries to listen to Colin’s breathing. “He is alive!” He adds. “He’s unconscious” He tries shaking him to try and get him to come round. “Where is Martha?” Kim asks while quickly looking around. “She has been gone five hours and she only went to find water and food” “I’ll go and look” Robbie says while pulling himself off the ground and walking off without anyone being able to stop him. --- “MARTHA!” He screams repeatedly with no reply. “CAN YOU HEAR ME?” --- “How is your arm?” Kim asks Kit who he could tell was in a lot of pain. “Any better?” “Yeah, I’m worried about Martha though” She clutches onto her leg, obviously trying to hide the pain. “She looked in a really bad way before she left” “She will be fine!” Belle snaps. “You are all so negative!” She turns to face the opposite way; she did not think it would all be fine. --- “MARTHA!” He suddenly heard faint cries coming from behind a tree and rushed to see what it was- it was Martha! “Are you okay?” Robbie frantically rushes over to see her. “I want to go home!” Martha throws her arms around Robbie. “I need Jack!” Robbie just comforts her because he did not know what to say, he felt the same way. --- “It’s about time” Belle snorts as Robbie returns back with Martha. “Where is the water then?” “There is none!” Robbie announces. “But at least we are all alive” Robbie tries to smiles but the others just stare at him blankly, except Martha who was still in tears. Were they really all alive? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 Ooooo, I'm going to answer that question at the end...YES they are all going to live! Especially Martha so that she can go back to Jack Great chapter, update soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catty Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 Pleace update.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 da-dum....*dramatic music plays* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 Thankss for the update! Belle Martha - Aww Robbie - Cute Kit - Aww Kim - hmm Colin - Alive More soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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