JosieTash Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 LOVE your latest chapter, belgshep, esp the Chosen One tie in with recent H&A ..... raindrops kill off Posh Josh is sooooooooooooooo coooooooooooool ..... to say nothing of Beth & Drew story ...... lots of avenues that i can take in Ch 05 !!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 LOVE your latest chapter, belgshep, esp the Chosen One tie in with recent H&A ..... raindrops kill of Posh Josh is sooooooooooooooo coooooooooooool ..... tio say notuihng of Beth & Drew story ...... lots pof avenues that i can take in Ch 05 !!!!! Lol I love it I might make a new one with a really random couple which is base around Lucas and Beth together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY glad that we have inspired you, Willz !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY glad that we have inspired you, Willz !!! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you have by every stars in the night sky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
belgshep Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY glad that we have inspired you, Willz !!! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you have by every stars in the night sky Glad you liked it. My fave bit was making Darth Hunter pee his pants!! He, he. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 6, 2006 Report Share Posted November 6, 2006 WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY glad that we have inspired you, Willz !!! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you have by every stars in the night sky Glad you liked it. My fave bit was making Darth Hunter pee his pants!! He, he. Haha yeh I love Darth Hunter :cool: as well as Beutiful Beth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted November 7, 2006 Report Share Posted November 7, 2006 Hope you all love the latest MAD, and moving, action below ..... CHAPTER 05 !!! DDG Drew & Beautiful Beth are in the middle of a passionate kissing embrace when Witchie Crone Cassie turned Beautiful Beth into ….. a LIVING STATUE !!! DDG Drew almost immediately realises that something is wrong. He extricates himself from the tight embrace. Beautiful Beth is now a VERY uniquely posed living statue, as her lips are puckered up (mid kiss),and her arms are still in they were just as Witchie Crone Cassie cast her spell, i.e. forming a triangle as they had been touching the small of DDG Drew’s back. DDG Drew can’t believe this was happened … and has NO IDEA why. He pokes Beautiful Beth’s upper arm with his finger, WITHOUT a response. Same lack of response happens when he GRABS her forearm, and when he both gently kisses her shoulder AND when he WAY kisses her lips. Beautiful Beth stands there motionless. DDG Drew even tries something that he thinks will DEFINITELY get a response – he places his hands firmly on both of Beautiful Beth’s lacy bra encased breasts. STILL no affect!!!! DDG Drew is WAY worried, AND frightened, and he flees the surf club. Soon after, Posh Josh & Kimmy encounter each other for the first time as they enter the club. Posh Josh & Kimmy shake hands, and not ONLY do Posh Josh’s bones shatter, but Kimmy “catches” Posh Josh’s disease, as his bones WAY shatter too. The bones of the 2 dead lie there near the entrance …….. until they are trampled into the tiny pieces by the stampede of people, incl. the likes of Alf, Colleen, Leah & SuperSized Sally, entering the surf club, as they try to escape the furious battle between GOOD (Jedi Master Mad Martha) and EVIL (Darth Hunter) – see below for more. Tilly is another of the people who enter – and she, like everyone, is a little surprised that Beautiful Beth appears to be being one of those street performers/buskers who gain money from people REALLY admiring how statue like that they can be for hours upon hour. All were particularly impressed with the embracing pose (complete with just a bra on her top half of her body) that Beautiful Beth is in. After Tilly and everyone has gone home, Tilly gets waaaaaaaaaaaay concerned when Beautiful Beth isn’t home by the time that Tilly expected her to be. There’s no answer when Tilly rings Beautiful Beth’s mobile, or the landline at Noah's. So, late at night, Tilly returns to the surf club, and discovers her mum STILL in the embracing pose. Tilly decides to do the ONLY thing she can think of to get her mum to stop the statue act – she quickly rushes home, and brings back some clothes with her. Tilly then, whilst standing RIGHT in front of Beautiful Beth, changes into the SLUTTIEST clothes that she has – with all the make up to match !!! Tilly is now REALLY concerned for her mum, who didn’t respond to the COPIOUS amount of Tilly’s flesh that is currently on show. Tilly KNOWS that lots of weird stuff happens in the Bay – but this appears to be WAY freaky even by the Bay’s usual standards. She can, however, sense that Beautiful Beth is ALIVE – and will be OK for a certain period of time before the lack of movement begins to REALLY affect her mum. Tilly also notices that there is some money at Beautiful Beth’s feet – as people must have REALLY admired how statue-like her mum had been. Tilly collected up the money – and, next morning, used the cash to begin her search from the secret lair of Witchie Crone Cassie – as Tilly believes the old bat is the only one who COULD have done this to Beautiful Beth. After a fruitless morning of searching, Tilly enters the surf club, to check on her mum, and once more sees there is some money (now in a hat that Tilly had placed there – to keep up the busker façade), but, when Tilly returns to the club late that night, she discovers that the “busking” money is GONE !!! When Tilly arrives home, she activates her computer – as Tilly thinks that the stolen money mystery is the PERFECT mission for Brit Kat, her trusty AI (artificial intelligence) companion - a program that she & her brother Robbie created about 10 months ago. Tilly is keen to see just what Brit Kat can come up with this time – by getting her companion to discover the thief, whilst Tilly continues the search for Witchie Crone Cassie’s lair !! Next day, Tilly sets up her lap top at the surf club unobtrusively near where Beautiful Beth is “busking”, and whilst Tilly searches for the evil witch, Brit Kat keeps watch on all the activity involving Tilly’s mum. After Noah’s closes for the night, and Tilly is STILL on the search for the secretive Witchie Crone Cassie, someone approaches – and then STEALS the money at Beautiful Beth’s feet. Brit Kat discreetly films the theft – and when the person is gone, Brit Kat searches its database – and discovers that the thief is BELLE !!! Brit Kat then does a FULL search of the Net for EVERYTHING about Belle – and makes the discovery about who Belle’s mother is !!! Later, Tilly enters the surf club (after a fruitless day of searching) and then is SHOCKED when she sees, on her lap top’s computer screen (courtesy of Brit Kat) not only the footage of Belle stealing the busking money, but Belle‘s birth certificate AND a FULL explanation (complete with pics etc) of how, after the 15 yr old Tilly gave BIRTH to Belle !!!, Beautiful Beth and her hubby (the late) Jack sent Tilly back to the point where she (Tilly) was just a baby again !!! Tilly is a TOTAL mess – she can’t believe that she is a MOTHER!!!, let alone the mother of a girl her OWN (supposed) age !!!! Tilly also sees, via another Net scan by Brit Kat, that the ONLY people who know of the birth, and the subsequent sending Tilly back to being a baby, are either DEAD (her father Jack) or a living statue (Beautiful Beth) !!!!!!! Elsewhere, the fierce lightasber duel between Jedi Master Mad Martha & Darth Hunter RAGES. The duo’s war takes them, at various points, to most of the Bay’s important locations, incl. the diner, SBH, the van park house, Angelic Amanda’s mansion, Leah’s house, leaving minor damage to the outside walls of each (with their lightsabers struck the buildings mid duel). As the acrobatic parry & thrust battle continued as they arrived on the main beach near the surf club, the Dark Forces are just POURING into Darth Hunter, to the point where he thinks that it will take precious seconds longer before he mentally overpowers the Jedi who trained him (and will gain the knowledge of the identity of the Chosen One). Indeed, Jedi Master Mad Martha appears to be all but defeated ….. when the 7 headed DANI DEMON emerged form the sea (after it LONG journey from South America) … and attacks BOTH Darth Hunter AND Jedi Master Mad Martha ….. Meanwhile, oblivious to ALL of this, on a beach somewhere in Queensland, a beautiful 5 year old girl named Lilly plays innocently with her mother, the Chosen One, GYPSY !!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
belgshep Posted November 7, 2006 Report Share Posted November 7, 2006 LOVE this chapter – way cool – and I’m SOooooooo pleased to see the wondrous Dani demon back !!!! Cool light-sabre battle and I love Beth as a living statue – Drew’s reaction was wonderful. Also, really love Brit Kat, the AI companion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Phoenix Posted November 9, 2006 Report Share Posted November 9, 2006 Another good additon =) Who would be more of a problem to deal with? Witchie crone cassie? OR The Dani demon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted November 10, 2006 Report Share Posted November 10, 2006 Both ARE waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay annoyiong, but i thik i'll vote for the Dani Demon !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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